ok...the usual 10 lines. U can start.

Look at this I'm at it again/ this is just another rap battle I'm meant to win.
fro-z wat is that/I don't know what that means/
but you're picture makes u look like a black charlie sheen/ you're probably as old as the hills/ i step on your face while spittin' with skillz/ U have no talent/nothin more to provide/you're probably readin this with an unzipped fly/haha made you look/ turn around and see your flow got took/
back to school where you flunk my class/
U'll get an F in rhythm and D in pizzaz.
Your vocab is rotten/ stale as biscuit/ don't try diss me don't even risk it.

waiting for the response..........................

I dont even know how to start a rap on dis kid
He's confident as hell like he just busted my lid
only thing busted was my nut on ur tounge
I wont hold diss against ya cuz i kno ur still young
Ima rip ur ass wider den tha boys with michael jackson
Ur ass on tha line now an thas wat im waxin
Got a question for u, now do I really look black
Im not bitch im white, u must be starin to hard at the hat
shit thats even half white ho, wat are u thinkin
dis kid looks at a girl an his dick starts shrinkin
cuz hes gay with pride aint got shit to hide
took it like a bitch i mean he bent over an cried
Ima gonna close this battle like ur mom should her thighs
shouldnt have entered this forum cuz losin is ur prize

uppin fa votes pleaze...
Nice battle i guess, u dont sound like u have ever battled tho

haha...funny stuff.............let the voters decide.

cmon vote an get this ova wit.....................

fro-z

I dont even know how to start a rap on dis kid
He's confident as hell like he just busted my lid<--ok opener not really hitting hard but ,personal ish,i guess..

only thing busted was my nut on ur tounge
I wont hold diss against ya cuz i kno ur still young<--ok..

Ima rip ur ass wider den tha boys with michael jackson
Ur ass on tha line now an thas wat im waxin<--blah jackson lines played already..

Got a question for u, now do I really look black
Im not bitch im white, u must be starin to hard at the hat<--what?..

shit thats even half white ho, wat are u thinkin
dis kid looks at a girl an his dick starts shrinkin<--no....blah..

cuz hes gay with pride aint got shit to hide
took it like a bitch i mean he bent over an cried<--ok..

Ima gonna close this battle like ur mom should her thighs
shouldnt have entered this forum cuz losin is ur prize<--not good..



DNFUO2

Look at this I'm at it again/ this is just another rap battle I'm meant to win.<--ok,not good ,not bad..

fro-z wat is that/I don't know what that means/
but you're picture makes u look like a black charlie sheen/ <--not a good personal here,dont see the resemblence...

you're probably as old as the hills/ i step on your face while spittin' with skillz/ U have no talent/nothin more to provide/you're probably readin this with an unzipped fly/haha made you look/ turn around and see your flow got took/<--not good at all..blah at this..

back to school where you flunk my class/
U'll get an F in rhythm and D in pizzaz.
Your vocab is rotten/ stale as biscuit/ don't try diss me don't even risk it.<--ewww i had to stop reading after this point,not a good verse...

vote fro-z i didnt think he had a good verse..but it wasnt bad,it just was a better battle verse..no really good punches..from either just froz took this..a little advice to the other cat write your verse a little differently it was way to hard to follow..

vote goes to Fro z
both need work maybe just more time put in it
froz had better oppener and closer
both need more flow

thanx, uppin still need more votes................

battle was blah... all the lines were blah... fro -z came played though, and thats just double blah... lmao... its kinda hard to explain..what am i going to say for each line ???
they wrre average FL material... not bad for fl not good. average. the battle goes to DNU, because his shit was funny to read to me.. iunno why it just came out like he was pourposely being stupid, it was funny.

v/ DNU

vote here. both of you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108487

hahaha this was a good battle yall should battle again..and yo froz looks like someone i know

punchlines- froz these lines took it (shit thats even half white ho, wat are u thinkin
dis kid looks at a girl an his dick starts shrinkin
cuz hes gay with pride aint got shit to hide
took it like a bitch i mean he bent over an cried
Ima gonna close this battle like ur mom should her thighs"

multies- neither
complexity in verse- neither
personals- froz.. dnufo2 had some nice ass personals.. but froz took everything he said and used it against him
overall vote- froz

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single file, single files hoes come on in

thats 3-1, we still need votes....... vote on this and i'll vote on urs

uppin still need two more votes......................