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12-31-03, 12:06 PM
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~Saga Continues~A must read
IP: 4577 CD9A
Since the dawn of man, he has dwelled at the edge of reality,
Resting in solitude. from the great battle with the dark forces of destruction. But evil can never be completely destroyed, Never made extinct, Slowly, the eternal malignant storm grew. And from the darkness, the evil descended once again to feed on the world. To delight in its Annihilation, To revel in chaos and pain, But fear no, for behold the warrior awakes. He rises from his slumber to spread his wings of justice once again, The warrior returns, resurrected to defend us all. And now, the Saga continues... Behold, the glorious Battle begins! |
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01-01-04, 12:30 AM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 6FC4 251C
i liked this for it was different. with a different message, but a strong one. you explained yourself pretty well, and made it understandable. it was short, and could be built onto more. with more detail, but the detail you did give was well written, just needs more.
~Tera~ DONT HATE
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01-03-04, 11:07 AM
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IP: B910 8CBB
..Uppin..
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01-05-04, 10:34 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
..Still uppin..
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01-06-04, 09:18 AM
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IP: C1DA C961
..what the fu*k???...where's the love people???..LOL!!!
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01-06-04, 02:55 PM
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~OrIgINaL eXeCuToNeR~
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IP: 02FA 2094
heh....your structure with this needs work...or this could have been something very good....(pm me if you have questions by the way)...i understoood the wordplay that you used...but some of the words that you incorperated into your sentences didn't flow so well...the imagery that went with this was well thought out...but you lacked some pictures here and there
igido...
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