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Old 06-30-08, 06:01 AM   #1
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JTR ( 0 ) vs BigChase ( 0 )

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Due times:Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.
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Old 06-30-08, 05:23 PM   #2
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checkk..
good luck man
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Old 06-30-08, 05:29 PM   #3
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10 lines sound good?
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Old 07-01-08, 03:08 PM   #4
Keith Moon
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threw together someone quick.. post already..

I went 12

Chase's sickest when I write, tempting emcees to bite
I will kill this Joker.. in broad daylight or on a dark knight
Nigga don't you know the boogeyman lives in your closet
Not to scare you but just to hide from you spittin that garbage
I'ma embarasss JTR, leave him in despair and sulking
Its no contest, when I'm battling Macaulay Culkin
Your bones are broken, cuz I'll snap them in half
like Kobe to shaq, He can try and eat my ass
No one's Home upstairs, no need to answer me shawty
Feel bad.. a boy stuck in Amy Whinehouse's body
Rock him like a party, can be mute and beat this bastard
Cuz didn't Cannibus already Rip This Jacker?
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Old 07-04-08, 10:37 AM   #5
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So you just happened to notice I resemble Mcauley Culkin huh? Aww man...

This pedophile notices my baby face, acts at first like he's propper
Then plans to get me when i'm home alone worse then the robbers
And I don't get this battle shit, like why the fuck do I even bother
Against a jealous that i'm Richie Rich, crack baby with no father
And he's alcoholic and homeless to boot, with no shelter to babysit
So he's been in the Whinehouse so much he could give Amy kids
And canibus put out Rip The Jacker, that album was hard to find some
Cuz his popular album was 2000 BC like where ur punches derived from
Why should i even try son? You aint shit to me, bitch you’re history
I’ll leave you sleeping with the fishes like Sponge Bob losing his virginity
And i'm known as a pimp, wrecking dames and having sex for days
But when I told a girl "play hard to get, I'll Chase you"
..she called the cops and pulled out pepper spray
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Old 07-01-08, 03:09 PM   #6
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http://i32.tinypic.com/fmi6ht.jpg The first link that didnt work

the second one that didnt work


and heres the thread he put them under


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You CAN'T use a pic in a battle of your opponent unless he agrees to it. I.E. you both agree to have a pic battle when you set the line limits. Or he can choose to have you DQ'd


I imagine you didn't see that in the rules, just thought I'd inform. I highly doubt JTR will DQ you though, if he even shows at all. Basically just for future reference.

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Old 07-03-08, 12:35 PM   #7
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ur lame cuz i need a pic of you to diss u back.... so put one up
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Old 07-03-08, 02:46 PM   #8
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how about i let u keep two votes.. and can just drop =]
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Old 07-03-08, 02:51 PM   #9
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Lol, why does JTR have so much trouble checking in on time?
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Old 07-03-08, 02:56 PM   #10
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idk haha..
well im leaving town soon fellas.. see you at the topical tournie? =]
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Old 07-04-08, 10:56 AM   #11
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Just for future reference, theres no feeding off verses either. But I'll allow it because Chase posted a pic up. But anyway, good shit guys. I'll be voting later tonight.
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Old 07-04-08, 12:33 PM   #12
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Okay... a pic battle verses a feeded verse... I got it like this...



Nigga don't you know the boogeyman lives in your closet
Not to scare you but just to hide from you spittin that garbage
Descent diss here

I'ma embarasss JTR, leave him in despair and sulking
Its no contest, when I'm battling Macaulay Culkin
This was cool

Your bones are broken, cuz I'll snap them in half
like Kobe to shaq, He can try and eat my ass
Barely descent

No one's Home upstairs, no need to answer me shawty
Feel bad.. a boy stuck in Amy Whinehouse's body
Good flips off his concept

Rock him like a party, can be mute and beat this bastard
Cuz didn't Cannibus already Rip This Jacker?
This was okay




This pedophile notices my baby face, acts at first like he's propper
Then plans to get me when i'm home alone worse then the robbers
Good setup and follow through into the next line for a good connected punch



And I don't get this battle shit, like why the fuck do I even bother
Against a jealous that i'm Richie Rich, crack baby with no father
Basic kinda diss here



And he's alcoholic and homeless to boot, with no shelter to babysit
So he's been in the Whinehouse so much he could give Amy kids
Original wordplay into a punch


And canibus put out Rip The Jacker, that album was hard to find some
Cuz his popular album was 2000 BC like where ur punches derived from
played concept talking about the era that punches are from



Why should i even try son? You aint shit to me, bitch you’re history
I’ll leave you sleeping with the fishes like Sponge Bob losing his virginity
Descent punch here


And i'm known as a pimp, wrecking dames and having sex for days
But when I told a girl "play hard to get, I'll Chase you"
..she called the cops and pulled out pepper spray
Descent hit here


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I felt that Big Chase delivered the better punches because JTR Fed but it did not seem to be done originally. However, the PIC made a big difference in this battle and really did not seem fair because JTR was not expected a pic battle...


Vote Big Chase
, better more wittier punches
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Old 07-04-08, 06:48 PM   #13
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Nigga don't you know the boogeyman lives in your closet
Not to scare you but just to hide from you spittin that garbage
Ehhh.

I'ma embarasss JTR, leave him in despair and sulking
Its no contest, when I'm battling Macaulay Culkin
Not really a punch.

Your bones are broken, cuz I'll snap them in half
like Kobe to shaq, He can try and eat my ass
Naaah.

No one's Home upstairs, no need to answer me shawty
Feel bad.. a boy stuck in Amy Whinehouse's body
Alright.

Rock him like a party, can be mute and beat this bastard
Cuz didn't Cannibus already Rip This Jacker?
Alright.




This pedophile notices my baby face, acts at first like he's propper
Then plans to get me when i'm home alone worse then the robbers
Naaah.

And I don't get this battle shit, like why the fuck do I even bother
Against a jealous that i'm Richie Rich, crack baby with no father
Naaaah,

And he's alcoholic and homeless to boot, with no shelter to babysit
So he's been in the Whinehouse so much he could give Amy kids
Decent.

And canibus put out Rip The Jacker, that album was hard to find some
Cuz his popular album was 2000 BC like where ur punches derived from
Decent.

Why should i even try son? You aint shit to me, bitch you’re history
I’ll leave you sleeping with the fishes like Sponge Bob losing his virginity
Lmao. Lame, dude.

And i'm known as a pimp, wrecking dames and having sex for days
But when I told a girl "play hard to get, I'll Chase you"
..she called the cops and pulled out pepper spray
Alright.

I think that JTR took this. It was a close battle but JTR was pretty much a little bit ahead of you the whole, with more thought out punches that hit a tad harder. Chase, work on directing your punches at your opponent more and try putting wit into your bars also. It was close though. Good drop both of you.

V/JTR
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Old 07-04-08, 12:40 PM   #14
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vote: big

harder punches always wins battles and all around more fun to read...
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Old 07-04-08, 12:49 PM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by dutch
vote: big

harder punches always wins battles and all around more fun to read...


punches: big
flow: tie
all around: big

Why should i even try son? You aint shit to me, bitch you’re history
I’ll leave you sleeping with the fishes like Sponge Bob losing his virginity

And i'm known as a pimp, wrecking dames and having sex for days
But when I told a girl "play hard to get, I'll Chase you"
..she called the cops and pulled out pepper spray

^^ creative and more enjoyable read then JTR not saying hes verse was trash but just wasnt enough to win..

Nigga don't you know the boogeyman lives in your closet
Not to scare you but just to hide from you spittin that garbage

No one's Home upstairs, no need to answer me shawty
Feel bad.. a boy stuck in Amy Whinehouse's body

decent hit here not bad..

but big had the all around harder better and more clever verse..


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