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Check in by: 10-30-04 at 05:14 PM

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..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 04:59 PM.

CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 05:01 PM.

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lyrics:
Betta Fix Ya robot Chip Cuz bars Are Gettin Wack....
Kidz Headz So Big His Nose broke my baseball bat
This dude resists from spittin a hot punchline
runn u ova like fat kidz wen its lunchtime...
Only Jetz U been in Is the 9/11 plane...
i brought u back to life so I could Merk You again....
Dawg I feel Like Will Smith In I Robot...
Gay Guys around u iz da only way u So-hot...
Carson Humps more guys then will-a-peer ...
U on da Bottom Im worth a mill-up-here....
Dawg theres no excuse to be wack and all
This Dude stays in the Closet Like Basketballs
Rip your head off like those little barbie Dolls....
Kid would be betta off spittin from his Mini-balls...
Lines Rape you..give u a Yeist Infection....
i think he forgot to read the "how to rap" directions..

second verse:

TOTAL FREESTYLE SO THERE AINT NO LYRICZ LOL

lol ahja at this omg your a fuckin retard oh my god...you the dumbest retard ive seen in my life...ahaha..../....wat in the heyl..u sound like a redneck

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Hey kontroversy.

You sound like a lil nigger.
And sad this is....you sound more robot than me....
And used that same played bunch that....like 10 people have used already.
Maybe next time you should use a beat...

And...O my....u didn't double over yourself. you like quadrupled ur voice over.
LMAO. If you get a vote.

I'll kick myself off this site....
O...
my kidneys.....

carson - you had better flow.......quality and punches overall ya verse was better.....intro was pretty good too

kon - ya quality wasnt that good and it was like you did an acapella for the first verse.......second verse was aight nothin special

cant really vote on this so it doesnt matter........just thought id peep it and give feedback

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

Carson:
k man im not hating on you but them vocals you got are bad...but other den that it was good but kontroversey he had some thing to his verse it jsut was hot carson work on your punches...you have good ones but not that good to beat him in audio...

Kontroversey..:
that was tight dawg...nice 2 verses and i like how the first verse had no beat that shit was dope...creative shit dopeness...im gonna keep this song on my lsit ahha...nice punches i liek the lien robot that was dope haha...cuz carson has like that robot vocal thing to his voice..

VOTE: Kontroverzey

return favour here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938

lmao...

I was reaslly pissed when I seen 1-0...
but it was lil shorty here.

so no biggie.-1 LOL

go cry..........
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Fukn nice carson, intro and song. u got a strange voice, but u use it so well, how do u get so much expression in your voice. PITO SAUTE AUKILAGI!

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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Kontroversy-- Very boring listen- No beat to entice me, Your dubs were very off, flow was sloppy, just very boring, please improve.
Carson- Hilarious intro, Come onto the beat nicely, much more entertaining, Im surprised your lyrics were actually clear, nice punches, I like the effects and sound effects you threw in... all in all better in every aspect... Vote carson.

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fuck you ^ i did improve that wasnt my best shyt


it was basically a freestyle

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