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Ikynoevel 1 33.33%
R-Rated 2 66.67%
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Old 11-07-04, 11:41 AM   #1
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Ikynoevel Vs. R-rated

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Ikynoevel (East Coast) Vs. R-rated (West Coast)


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Topic Is...Your tied up and forced to watch a group of people torture and kill the person closest to you, mention who it is and the emotions that you go through and describe what they do to the person.
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Old 11-07-04, 04:11 PM   #2
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.::Checkity-Check::.

::.I Hope This Muphucka Good At Topicals.::

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Old 11-08-04, 10:49 PM   #3
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fuck man yall gotta notifie people i didnt even remember signing up for this
 
Old 11-11-04, 11:01 PM   #4
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.::A Little Rusty..But Yea..36 Lines Here..Hope Ya Like It::.

A Shadowious Vision..I Awaken Imprisoned In A Prisim..
Acid Tablets Fizz'm..Through The Smiles of Crimson..
I Can't Pull Forth..The Force Has Me Forced N Coursed..
Too Dark To Distort..The Echos of Screams To Deport..
The Source of Remorse..My Vision Clears Into A Sort..
Sight Sharp Like Swords..See My Bro Lying On Da Floor..
Suddenly My Face Engulfed..Within A Glove Covered Palm..
Pounded Wit A Fist Assualt But I'm Trying To Keep Calm..
The Pain Subsides With Pressure..Gesture of Leisure..
Measure Your Life..To Them Its Death That Pleasures..
My Thoughts Come To Reality As My Chair Subsides..
My Vision Horizontal..As A Boot Knocks My Face Aside..
The Taste Of Blood..My Eyes Burn From My Running Sweat..
The Rage Builds..Though I'm Tied Up, Not A Real Threat..
I Hear Bodies Collide..4 Figures In Black Jumpsuits..
A Soul-Body Drivin With Pride..But Persistant Pursuit..
With Brutality..Viscious Strikes Converged In Animality..
In Actual Mentality..The Morality Wasn't In Mortality..
With Abnormality..They Beat Him With Strikes of Fatality..
Fuck Hospitality..Four Brain Stems Formed A Single Personality..
My Heart Pace Quickens..As I Hear Glass Shatter Near..
My Blood Flow Thickens..As I See Blood Splatered and Smeared..
I'm Shaken..I'm Scared..Fuck It I'm Straight Nervous..
I'm Blackin Out..I Can't..I Gotta Give Supportive Service..
I'm Scrambling..The Ropes Too Tight..My Head Too Light..
My Mind Rambling..It's Not Right For Us To Die Tonight..
The Tears Free-Fall..As I Hear The Other Three Call..
"Haul The Bodies..We'll Leave Them To Rot In The Hall"..
I Hear The Click..As The Bullets Emmit In The Chamber..
I Start Feeling Sick..Filled With Useless Rage and Anger..
Two Shots Fire..Shock Fills My Body..As I Turn I See..
My Homeboi's Dead Body..Who I Swore To Protect For An Eternity..
I Ask God Why..But He Says Nothing Back..The Chrome Glissins..
Explosions Erupt..My Head Disappers..Like He Was A Magician..
Fuck Critical Condition..Filled With Political Ammunition..
Case Closed and Shut..Two Dead Gangbangers Who Had No Ambition..

~R~
 
Old 11-11-04, 11:31 PM   #5
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R-Rated should be dq'd from this battle due to the fact that he went over the line limit

but just incase he doesnt get DQ'd then i guess this 15 minute key will have to do




..*Puts head down in pain*..
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Loud noises.. the laughter.. my sweat is drippin..
My love is hanging dead.. right were they left me Sittin..


Dear God,
Since ive been famous we dont speak much But Shits hott..
And i cant Reach Out.. At least not with both of my wrist Lock'd
Im watchin a nightmare.. Stephanie My one u could say..
The game was over.. that very minute she won me That Day
This chair is rock hard.. Sorta like the rock in my throat...
They tied her neck N pushed and i just watch'd her Choke.
These men were serious.. but i dont have a clue Im blank..
like my expression as im bout the blow when they shoot the tank
Ive been wit my love for 10 years.. its so hard to grasp..
Like my afternoon shadow whenever it doesnt do what i ask
2 minutes go by.. she's still and everyone is out of sight.
I pray for steph but i kno she's in the light thats now to bright
My rap career is over... Fuck my money my jewels and house
Like the umpire wit the signal My pain just Rules Them out..!
I say more prayers while i speak i kno she's Passin grace..
Just then i look ahead and suddendly i see Aston's Face..
He told me that was a fake manican made just like skin...
He puts his arm around my shoulder and says uve been punk'd again
Im so surprised all the tears i cried Durin that whole while..
then Steph walks out hard headed.. rockin' a Great Big Smile!..
My mind just bottom'd out Starting wit the Trunk in the rear..
The next day i got an award.. for receivin the Punk of the year!
 
Old 11-13-04, 02:37 PM   #6
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Hmmmm....NewPort did'nt realli stay on topic...He lacked Vocab which R-Rated Beat him in...
Newport-Off Topic-Lack of Vocab-Was'nt realliy complex,

R-Rated- Good Piece-Had better Vocab, Nice concept's Much more Complex, Good Multie's but they were'nt realli relevant if you know what i mean...

Vote/R-Rated.
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Old 11-13-04, 04:17 PM   #7
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vblahl blah blah blah
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Old 11-15-04, 04:08 PM   #8
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r-rated got this....you went over line limit but i was feelin ya drop more..
lol...ya closer was aight...no multi's but alot of single syllable inner ryhmes..
helped with flow even though you lost yaself with some of the vocab, it did'nt
always make sense...still good drop though..
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conclusion learn what a multi is..lol...go to omb's tutorial...pc
^jus thought ide tell you...lol
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 11-16-04, 12:25 PM   #9
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R-rated wins because of all the people who think taking 5 minutes out of this busy schedule to vote on a battle will kill them.
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