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Old 02-28-09, 06:48 PM   #1
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Snocap vs Da Problem Child

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Old 02-28-09, 06:49 PM   #2
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Old 02-28-09, 07:39 PM   #3
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I melt snow quick, never contiplated
he claims he's the shit, well im the pill, i'll make this dude constipated
your cap of snow wont last fo',your linez are fading
his flow needs practice, try masterbation
I'll violate this clown in mass-invasion
with heat that will leave snow cap in evaporation
turn it up with 500F with a shift-on-it
your snow couldnt be gold if I pissed-on-it
its best to quit, my lines will lyrically hang you
which will refrain you,for your only effective deed is making snow angels
Da Problem Childz a Pimp, you should shelter-your-spouse
'cause you girl hates snow but loves it when I melt-in-her-mouth
I guess you are cold, cant say that for your rhymes
so therefore your not hot enough for any more of my lines
..........so consider your self water, BITCH IM SUMMER TIME!
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Old 03-03-09, 12:29 AM   #4
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Old 03-03-09, 12:48 AM   #5
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its simple fam, Snocap spit and rip this man...
DA problem child? or cassidys biggest fan?//
I'll have em in a ambulance on the freeway if you swayin votes like leway...
Claim to be hard but we all know he gay...last time he did a bid was on e-bay!!//
I'm the type to grind, not drugs, your mind into pints and dimes...line for line?
battle one more time and you might find that your biggest problem is writting rhymes//
ya bars got me bored fast, SO you could only be makin fraud cash...
my mind store blasts and being stocky the only way you in a broadcast!!//
and im attackin patients, kid cant handle my imagination...
how you gonna guard against sno but couldn't fight off vaccinations!!//
Me vs you, whats the results? more votes for me in the polls...
aint worried bout his feeble insults
plus i spit last cuz children shouldn't talk back to adults!!//

there something quick for you because im tired of you Pming me
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Old 03-03-09, 02:01 AM   #6
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Overall good attaks problem child took this with better word usage and personal. I like this no hate but i gotcha.
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Old 03-03-09, 05:27 AM   #7
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Well problem u seem to be elevate'n sum, your verse was better structured, sum disses were alittle cheesey but work out alot better then sno's.Flo goes to problem as well.

Sno your verse wasnt that nice to read to be honest, but i know you can do better then this from our previous battle.Sno u had 2 lines that were ok at best, if u was tired of his pm's why didnt u crush him rather then doodling?

Anywayz no hate on both.

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Old 03-03-09, 10:14 AM   #8
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I melt snow quick, never contiplated
he claims he's the shit, well im the pill, i'll make this dude constipated
your cap of snow wont last fo',your linez are fading
his flow needs practice, try masterbation
I'll violate this clown in mass-invasion
with heat that will leave snow cap in evaporation
turn it up with 500F with a shift-on-it
your snow couldnt be gold if I pissed-on-it
its best to quit, my lines will lyrically hang you
which will refrain you,for your only effective deed is making snow angels
Da Problem Childz a Pimp, you should shelter-your-spouse
'cause you girl hates snow but loves it when I melt-in-her-mouth
I guess you are cold, cant say that for your rhymes
so therefore your not hot enough for any more of my lines
..........so consider your self water, BITCH IM SUMMER TIME

7/10
decent flow, some decent concept, decent punches that could of been harder but wasnt weak either, decent diss, not a bad verse at all kid props..

*advice*
dont feed off hes name so much because it kind show u lacked in creativity...


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its simple fam, Snocap spit and rip this man...
DA problem child? or cassidys biggest fan?//
I'll have em in a ambulance on the freeway if you swayin votes like leway...
Claim to be hard but we all know he gay...last time he did a bid was on e-bay!!//
I'm the type to grind, not drugs, your mind into pints and dimes...line for line?
battle one more time and you might find that your biggest problem is writting rhymes//
ya bars got me bored fast, SO you could only be makin fraud cash...
my mind store blasts and being stocky the only way you in a broadcast!!//
and im attackin patients, kid cant handle my imagination...
how you gonna guard against sno but couldn't fight off vaccinations!!//
Me vs you, whats the results? more votes for me in the polls...
aint worried bout his feeble insults
plus i spit last cuz children shouldn't talk back to adults!!//

8.5/10

pretty good punches that connect with decent set up lines *props* decent flow, decent concept well exsecuted verse.. *props*

the e-bay line was good proper set up and delievery good job..

VOTE: snocap
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Old 03-03-09, 06:14 PM   #9
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This is a nice battle to be honest................
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Old 03-03-09, 09:06 PM   #10
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snocap:
its simple fam, Snocap spit and rip this man...
DA problem child? or cassidys biggest fan?//
I'll have em in a ambulance on the freeway if you swayin votes like leway...
Claim to be hard but we all know he gay...last time he did a bid was on e-bay!!//

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peoblem:
turn it up with 500F with a shift-on-it
your snow couldnt be gold if I pissed-on-it


this way a very weak battle .. i give my vote to Sno for one better punchline....
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Old 03-04-09, 12:32 AM   #11
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I'll violate this clown in mass-invasion
with heat that will leave snow cap in evaporation
so therefore your not hot enough for any more of my lines
..........so consider your self water, BITCH IM SUMMER TIME!


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its simple fam, Snocap spit and rip this man...
DA problem child? or cassidys biggest fan?//
ya bars got me bored fast, SO you could only be makin fraud cash...
my mind store blasts and being stocky the only way you in a broadcast!!//
I'll have em in a ambulance on the freeway if you swayin votes like leway...
Claim to be hard but we all know he gay...last time he did a bid was on e-bay!!//




after reading this battle a couple of times, it was actually closer than i first thought

Da Problem child didn't loose by much, Sno...stop keystling shit, otherwise you'll loose, most of your shit you dropped was not that great, except the lines i quoted where pretty much on par with DPC, but no much better

you both need to start steppin it up


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Old 03-04-09, 01:20 AM   #12
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Pretty good battle here.

Snocap, This is much better then you drop against Kirk. You came with more actual punches than self-glorifying bars. You had some good stuff, nice word play and a pretty hard hitting personal. Good drop.


Child, You also had some good punches, but must used the same concept and I just wasn't feeling that. You played off his name too many times when you should have only done it once. I was definitely feeling your last bar though, that was pretty nice. That was the only thing I was really feeling though.


Overall, Snocap just came more original. DPC played off his name too many times and that hurt him.
No hate to either, both of you stay up.
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Old 03-04-09, 12:02 PM   #13
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straight up good battle...but da problem child kept that shit comin the whole time...and its was dope how he started out ice and turned to water goood shittt homie...sno cap started out strong and i didnt know who to choose but his ending was wack...so my vote goes to da problem child
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Old 03-04-09, 02:25 PM   #14
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thanks for voting everyone... upping for the last couple of votes.
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Old 03-04-09, 06:42 PM   #15
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