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03-10-05, 11:57 PM | #16 | ||||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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exactly lol...but still RTF lol
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03-11-05, 01:27 PM | #17 | |||
Tight.
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Dope. Emotion in this seemed quite present to me when I was reading this, probably because I have seen lots of mental child abuse, but it was strong. The title, was applicable to the topic, which is great, and you just gave me a massive brainwave for a topic. The metaphors simili's in here were quite good and used in the right context I feel for this topic. The flow was pretty much right on point through the whole piece. Props to you on this.
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03-11-05, 07:32 PM | #18 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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thanks alot...
uppin |
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03-18-05, 08:45 PM | #19 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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uppin......................
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