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Old 04-05-07, 01:19 PM   #1
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3. Wireless (5-3) vs. 4. Civilized Gangsta (2-1)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Celebrity Rapper Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the rapper you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's rapper. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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Wireless as Andy Milinakos

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Civilized Gangsta as Young Dro


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
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Old 04-05-07, 05:02 PM   #2
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LMAO easy.
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Old 04-05-07, 08:59 PM   #3
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dog, you're garbage.
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Old 04-10-07, 12:00 AM   #4
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i want to eat a rapper, got some cravings
rubberband banks is more like ya family's savings
scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes
listened to ur songs.. shit sounds the same, nerd..
its sad to say that ya scheme's more basic than you're fucking words
when life gives me lemons, i make beef stew.. i go hard, no slack..
when life gives him lemons.. he goes hard.. and sells them for crack
your gimmicks played dog and im not saying that jokingly
cuz if you shoulder leaned anymore.. then he'd be on his knees blowing me
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Old 04-10-07, 12:16 AM   #5
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Bitch is hungry for attention, You always gon be fat dude
U went overboard wit the cerial...
.................We only smilin, cuz we laughin at you
U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one
It took you forever to get noticed, MONTHS and still wack
You were movin forward, then hop skipped and Jumped back
U win this? stop lyin to yaself, that rope won't do it right
We just kept ya head up, So you didn't choke or commit suicide
Somebody 'feed' this fat boy, before he starts dyin for food
& throw him a cheeseburger, before he starts biting rhymes too
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Old 04-10-07, 03:13 AM   #6
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i want to eat a rapper, got some cravings
rubberband banks is more like ya family's savings
decent 2.5/3
scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes
nah 0/3
listened to ur songs.. shit sounds the same, nerd..
its sad to say that ya scheme's more basic than you're fucking words
meh 1/3
when life gives me lemons, i make beef stew.. i go hard, no slack..
when life gives him lemons.. he goes hard.. and sells them for crack
ha, cool 3/3
your gimmicks played dog and im not saying that jokingly
cuz if you shoulder leaned anymore.. then he'd be on his knees blowing me
coulda been worded and used better, meh 1/3

7.5 in total


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Bitch is hungry for attention, You always gon be fat dude
U went overboard wit the cerial...
.................We only smilin, cuz we laughin at you
meh cuz of wording 1/3
U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one
ok 2/3
It took you forever to get noticed, MONTHS and still wack
You were movin forward, then hop skipped and Jumped back
nah 0/3
U win this? stop lyin to yaself, that rope won't do it right
We just kept ya head up, So you didn't choke or commit suicide
ok 2/3
Somebody 'feed' this fat boy, before he starts dyin for food
& throw him a cheeseburger, before he starts biting rhymes too
no 0/3

5 in total

Wow, I didnt like this battle, alot could have been said more...like how andy is like 30 and shit......well vote: Heychoo for being just a bit better
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Old 04-10-07, 03:20 AM   #7
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i want to eat a rapper, got some cravings
rubberband banks is more like ya family's savings
Cool
scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes
lol
listened to ur songs.. shit sounds the same, nerd..
its sad to say that ya scheme's more basic than you're fucking words
ok
when life gives me lemons, i make beef stew.. i go hard, no slack..
when life gives him lemons.. he goes hard.. and sells them for crack
Nice
your gimmicks played dog and im not saying that jokingly
cuz if you shoulder leaned anymore.. then he'd be on his knees blowing me
lmao



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Bitch is hungry for attention, You always gon be fat dude
U went overboard wit the cerial...
.................We only smilin, cuz we laughin at you
Nah, no real diss here
U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one
ok @ best, but he is a rapper he made a song with J-Kwon
It took you forever to get noticed, MONTHS and still wack
You were movin forward, then hop skipped and Jumped back
ok
U win this? stop lyin to yaself, that rope won't do it right
We just kept ya head up, So you didn't choke or commit suicide
lol
Somebody 'feed' this fat boy, before he starts dyin for food
& throw him a cheeseburger, before he starts biting rhymes too
nah


Heychoo pwned em' imo...


V- Heychoo...for stronger disses.
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Old 04-10-07, 08:45 AM   #8
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Old 04-11-07, 05:18 PM   #9
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scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes

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U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one

Short battle here, a few alright lines, tho nothing special. From Wireless, same clothes line, that was kinda funny.. dunno why, but made me chuckle. I didn't think anything else u had was great, but u were fairly consistent with shit. U got that humor thing goin' for u, u just gotta learn to up ur complexity. Civilized, line i quoted was okay cuz its kinda true, but that was about it. Head up line wasn't too bad, but its kinda played. Biting line u had was played n' opener wasn't a good pic diss. I think Wireless got it.

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Old 04-12-07, 02:47 PM   #10
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sorry i didnt get into detal,, dont have much time on here

i want to eat a rapper, got some cravings
rubberband banks is more like ya family's savings
scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes

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U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one

v//hey
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Old 04-12-07, 04:48 PM   #11
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i want to eat a rapper, got some cravings
rubberband banks is more like ya family's savings
lol,ok^^
scary dog? lol maybe.. u still cant pull hoes
i saw young dro in the shining.. and hes still wearin those same clothes
lol, ok^^
listened to ur songs.. shit sounds the same, nerd..
its sad to say that ya scheme's more basic than you're fucking words
iight^^
when life gives me lemons, i make beef stew.. i go hard, no slack..
when life gives him lemons.. he goes hard.. and sells them for crack
lol, nahhh^^
your gimmicks played dog and im not saying that jokingly
cuz if you shoulder leaned anymore.. then he'd be on his knees blowing me
lol, ok^^

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Bitch is hungry for attention, You always gon be fat dude
U went overboard wit the cerial...
.................We only smilin, cuz we laughin at you
lol, ok^^
U been around for a minute, but i'm gon steal ya spot son
How the fuck i'm gon diss a 'rapper' thats STILL not one
iight^^
It took you forever to get noticed, MONTHS and still wack
You were movin forward, then hop skipped and Jumped back
ok, wording^^
U win this? stop lyin to yaself, that rope won't do it right
We just kept ya head up, So you didn't choke or commit suicide
setup...^^
Somebody 'feed' this fat boy, before he starts dyin for food
& throw him a cheeseburger, before he starts biting rhymes too
lol, ok^^

some decent punches here, heychoo had the more creative setups that hit harsher... k.stubbs cuddnt get his wording down... with his set up.. hey came better with the personals too. i could see more connections with his verse.

v/Wireless
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Old 04-12-07, 07:17 PM   #12
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your gimmicks played dog and im not saying that jokingly
cuz if you shoulder leaned anymore.. then he'd be on his knees blowing me

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U win this? stop lyin to yaself, that rope won't do it right
We just kept ya head up, So you didn't choke or commit suicide


didnt like this battle much..
from the quoteds.. imma have to go wit Wireless

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Old 04-12-07, 07:40 PM   #13
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Wireless wins 6-0. Neither vote so that cancels out.

Wireless WINS 6-3
Civilized Gangsta LOSES 2-2
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