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Old 04-12-07, 09:50 PM   #1
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9. DaTrusHurtz (8-1) vs. 10. Civilized Gangsta (2-2)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Cartoon Character Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the cartoon character you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's character. You may use the picture if you wish, but do not have to. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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DaTrusHurtz as Pikachu

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Civilized Gangsta as Road Runner


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00AM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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Old 04-12-07, 10:00 PM   #2
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Old 04-12-07, 10:12 PM   #3
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Old 04-17-07, 01:51 AM   #4
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Where are u man? I guess I'll drop tomorrow since u ain't here yet
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Old 04-17-07, 01:55 PM   #5
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Such a subordinate bitch, no doubt you must enjoy bein told what to do
Ya gettin burnt so much...I guess Ash really is rubbin off on you.
Real compliant, but you aignt evolved yet... ya fightin ya own shame
Ya on the lowest level, if ya biggest problem is pronouncin ya whole name
Tha fuck you develope such a studder? go ahead and thrash n then you'll lose
How the fuck you live in a pokeball? and yet the worlds crashin in on you
Fuck every one of ya moves, try and fight me guy..but put on ya game face
Cuz lighting wouldn't strike me twice..if i STOOD in the same place
I'll put you to shame ace!!! picachu, riachu..PLAYED i'll test em both
& mistreat you so bad, you'll be wishin you stayed with professor Oaks
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Old 04-17-07, 09:55 PM   #6
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A Looney Toon? I'd try, but I don't need to come harder
I've only seen one good LT...
... and that dude plays for the chargers
Straight rippin this fag, I'll make fun of this gay
Road Runner's like dudes who sign out...
... he always seems to be running away
Punks sucks n' is lame, man fuck what u say
Ur NOT slick, the escapes u make put the keyboard button to shame
N' immitating u's easy, I'm gonna pound u to flakes
All I need is a car...
... I can honk and produce ALL the sounds that u make
Always on the run, it'd be a shame if you clock me
U get chased by so many Coyotes, u could play professional hockey
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Old 04-17-07, 10:32 PM   #7
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Such a subordinate bitch, no doubt you must enjoy bein told what to do
Ya gettin burnt so much...I guess Ash really is rubbin off on you.


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Punks sucks n' is lame, man fuck what u say
Ur NOT slick, the escapes u make put the keyboard button to shame
N' immitating u's easy, I'm gonna pound u to flakes
All I need is a car...
... I can honk and produce ALL the sounds that u make




Eh, this was one sided. But Stubbs suprised me with that one punch...it was pretty nice. However, it was the only good thing in his verse. Trus on the other hand had those 2 dope lines and then the rest was decent. That's why I got Datrushurts taking it.

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Old 04-18-07, 04:21 PM   #8
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K. Stubbs
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Such a subordinate bitch, no doubt you must enjoy bein told what to do
Ya gettin burnt so much...I guess Ash really is rubbin off on you.
Decent concept. So-so. 1/2
Real compliant, but you aignt evolved yet... ya fightin ya own shame
Ya on the lowest level, if ya biggest problem is pronouncin ya whole name
Shoulda been reworded to be harsher. 0.5/2
Tha fuck you develope such a studder? go ahead and thrash n then you'll lose
How the fuck you live in a pokeball? and yet the worlds crashin in on you
Needed rewording, once again. Creative concept tho. 1/2
Fuck every one of ya moves, try and fight me guy..but put on ya game face
Cuz lighting wouldn't strike me twice..if i STOOD in the same place
Uhhh... nah. 0.5/2
I'll put you to shame ace!!! picachu, riachu..PLAYED i'll test em both
& mistreat you so bad, you'll be wishin you stayed with professor Oaks
Boring. Weak threat. 0.5/2

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DaTrusHurtz
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A Looney Toon? I'd try, but I don't need to come harder
I've only seen one good LT...
... and that dude plays for the chargers
Ok. Decent. 1/2
Straight rippin this fag, I'll make fun of this gay
Road Runner's like dudes who sign out...
... he always seems to be running away
Wasn't feelin this. 0.5/2
Punks sucks n' is lame, man fuck what u say
Ur NOT slick, the escapes u make put the keyboard button to shame
Ehhhh... Ok, so-so. 1/2
N' immitating u's easy, I'm gonna pound u to flakes
All I need is a car...
... I can honk and produce ALL the sounds that u make
I get it, but it aint really a punch/diss. ? 1/2
Always on the run, it'd be a shame if you clock me
U get chased by so many Coyotes, u could play professional hockey
I get the comparison, but, just aint hard-hitting. 1/2

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Old 04-18-07, 07:06 PM   #9
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Such a subordinate bitch, no doubt you must enjoy bein told what to do
Ya gettin burnt so much...I guess Ash really is rubbin off on you.
Cool
Real compliant, but you aignt evolved yet... ya fightin ya own shame
Ya on the lowest level, if ya biggest problem is pronouncin ya whole name
Not really
Tha fuck you develope such a studder? go ahead and thrash n then you'll lose
How the fuck you live in a pokeball? and yet the worlds crashin in on you
Not really mang
Fuck every one of ya moves, try and fight me guy..but put on ya game face
Cuz lighting wouldn't strike me twice..if i STOOD in the same place
Decent
I'll put you to shame ace!!! picachu, riachu..PLAYED i'll test em both
& mistreat you so bad, you'll be wishin you stayed with professor Oaks
Decent

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A Looney Toon? I'd try, but I don't need to come harder
I've only seen one good LT...
... and that dude plays for the chargers
decent
Straight rippin this fag, I'll make fun of this gay
Road Runner's like dudes who sign out...
... he always seems to be running away
decent
Punks sucks n' is lame, man fuck what u say
Ur NOT slick, the escapes u make put the keyboard button to shame
decent
N' immitating u's easy, I'm gonna pound u to flakes
All I need is a car...
... I can honk and produce ALL the sounds that u make
Cool
Always on the run, it'd be a shame if you clock me
U get chased by so many Coyotes, u could play professional hockey
decent

Civil had a cool opener, everything else I didn't feel or was 'decent'
Da Trust was straight decent, so a consistant verse overall & thought his second last line was pretty cool.

V// Da Trust Hurtz, better punches/consistancy overall
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Old 04-18-07, 08:01 PM   #10
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K. Stubbs:
Such a subordinate bitch, no doubt you must enjoy bein told what to do
Ya gettin burnt so much...I guess Ash really is rubbin off on you.
^Clever punch. I was kinda feeling this one. 2/5
Real compliant, but you aignt evolved yet... ya fightin ya own shame
Ya on the lowest level, if ya biggest problem is pronouncin ya whole name
^Hah. Funny diss. Decent punch. 2/5
Tha fuck you develope such a studder? go ahead and thrash n then you'll lose
How the fuck you live in a pokeball? and yet the worlds crashin in on you
^Eh. This was ok, a bit weak for my taste. 1/5
Fuck every one of ya moves, try and fight me guy..but put on ya game face
Cuz lighting wouldn't strike me twice..if i STOOD in the same place
^I get what you are sayin'. Clever punch. Just didn't hit too hard. 1/5
I'll put you to shame ace!!! picachu, riachu..PLAYED i'll test em both
& mistreat you so bad, you'll be wishin you stayed with professor Oaks
^Another indirect punchline here. Blah. 0/5


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DaTrusHurtz:
A Looney Toon? I'd try, but I don't need to come harder
I've only seen one good LT...
... and that dude plays for the chargers
^Unique play on LooneyToons. Punch wasn't too bad. 2/5
Straight rippin this fag, I'll make fun of this gay
Road Runner's like dudes who sign out...
... he always seems to be running away
^Nah. This was a tad bit weak. Not hard hitting. 1/5
Punks sucks n' is lame, man fuck what u say
Ur NOT slick, the escapes u make put the keyboard button to shame
^This was pretty cool. Nothing special, but clever. 2/5
N' immitating u's easy, I'm gonna pound u to flakes
All I need is a car...
... I can honk and produce ALL the sounds that u make
^I understand what you are sayin', but this isn't a punch. 1/5
Always on the run, it'd be a shame if you clock me
U get chased by so many Coyotes, u could play professional hockey
^Nice meta. BTW it's only ONE Coyote, lol. But this didn't do much damage. 1/5



Overall it was closer than I thought. Both came alright in this battle. I know they can do better. Came w/ some pretty lame concepts/flips. I thought this would of be an iller battle. But it was very hard to chose a winner. It came down that close.






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Old 04-19-07, 11:54 AM   #11
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Definately a better battle here though pretty one-sided. Civilized had the Ash line, and i also liked the lightning strike twice line too, ws kinda cool. DTH was a lot more consistent but it was definately not a hard drop, opener was cool, but could have been so much better. Escape/keyboard line was nice and the last 4 lines we're pretty cool witht he car/honk and chased by coyotes. Not hard hitting but cool flips.

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Old 04-19-07, 01:21 PM   #12
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5-0

DaTrusHurtz WINS 9-1
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