Check yo.........

Da' fuck son!?

Fuckin faggot..
Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
Now the truth's been told.. it's impairin ya mind
hardcore gangsta? bitch please..
until the carter II you didn't even swear in ya rhymes
fucking young ass bitch trying to fill veteran shoes
bitch please..
get on your knee's and bow, wow.. even he did ^ that better than you
I'm a legend in the game, what'cha bitch ass gone do to me?
I've been rippin' mics since ya bitch ass hit puberty
fuck ya label.. my bullet's rip through ya chests vest
Cash Money WAS dope before you joined and the rest left
You got your eyes on Trina.. I'll murk you in one statement bitch
on a radio interview she stated "it's more of a brother/sister relationship"
real talk.. your a scrony, ugly ass motherfucker son, I'll leave you dead
Weezy's a throwback.. he's got Tupac's body and Bob Marley's head

lol...w/e i dont even want in a league that dont want me i just came to this shit so i could elevate but fuck that....(this isnt me quittin )

...

straight keystylin it cuz like i always say im PAUSEist
how you gon front you the one cleanin out your closet
your fuckin mind you done lost it
face it you cant be black...even when takin out the frost tips
you cant see me i got my eyes closed read the eyelids
scared to face me so i guess you are fearin god bitch
only lines white boy got is the white lines that fucked up his brain
my...i mean your girl went black thats why since she came back...
......she aint acting the same
your fuckin songs is lame noone want to hear bout your life
we already know you gotta ugly kid and fucked up ex wife
so just resign as in quit dont re-sign a contract
return to the 8 mile and give your promoters their nine back
there must be k-9s on the other side of the beef stack
cuz when it arrives your crew acts as scared pussy cats
celebrity spotlight messin up your kid that wotn be an issue
cuz she already be fucked up by 15 cuz she be always hangin wit you
i gues you could say bullets is what you spittin
but only cuz, like in your encore cd cover, its killin us to listen

Fuckin faggot..
Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
iight
Now the truth's been told.. it's impairin ya mind
hardcore gangsta? bitch please..
until the carter II you didn't even swear in ya rhymes
decent
fucking young ass bitch trying to fill veteran shoes
bitch please..
get on your knee's and bow, wow.. even he did ^ that better than you
meh
I'm a legend in the game, what'cha bitch ass gone do to me?
I've been rippin' mics since ya bitch ass hit puberty
nah
fuck ya label.. my bullet's rip through ya chests vest
Cash Money WAS dope before you joined and the rest left
ok
You got your eyes on Trina.. I'll murk you in one statement bitch
on a radio interview she stated "it's more of a brother/sister relationship"
ha, nice
real talk.. your a scrony, ugly ass motherfucker son, I'll leave you dead
Weezy's a throwback.. he's got Tupac's body and Bob Marley's head
ha, cool




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straight keystylin it cuz like i always say im PAUSEist
how you gon front you the one cleanin out your closet
meh
your fuckin mind you done lost it
face it you cant be black...even when takin out the frost tips
no
you cant see me i got my eyes closed read the eyelids
scared to face me so i guess you are fearin god bitch
wack
only lines white boy got is the white lines that fucked up his brain
my...i mean your girl went black thats why since she came back...
......she aint acting the same
no diss to him
your fuckin songs is lame noone want to hear bout your life
we already know you gotta ugly kid and fucked up ex wife
decent
so just resign as in quit dont re-sign a contract
return to the 8 mile and give your promoters their nine back
no
there must be k-9s on the other side of the beef stack
cuz when it arrives your crew acts as scared pussy cats
'no
celebrity spotlight messin up your kid that wotn be an issue
cuz she already be fucked up by 15 cuz she be always hangin wit you
meh
i gues you could say bullets is what you spittin
but only cuz, like in your encore cd cover, its killin us to listen
ok

vote Dao, weak battle both could have dissed they're opponent alot better.

Fuckin faggot..
Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
Ok
Now the truth's been told.. it's impairin ya mind
hardcore gangsta? bitch please..
until the carter II you didn't even swear in ya rhymes
Ok
fucking young ass bitch trying to fill veteran shoes
bitch please..
get on your knee's and bow, wow.. even he did ^ that better than you
Nope
I'm a legend in the game, what'cha bitch ass gone do to me?
I've been rippin' mics since ya bitch ass hit puberty
Weak
fuck ya label.. my bullet's rip through ya chests vest
Cash Money WAS dope before you joined and the rest left
Nah
You got your eyes on Trina.. I'll murk you in one statement bitch
on a radio interview she stated "it's more of a brother/sister relationship"
Lol ok
real talk.. your a scrony, ugly ass motherfucker son, I'll leave you dead
Weezy's a throwback.. he's got Tupac's body and Bob Marley's head
lol ok again


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straight keystylin it cuz like i always say im PAUSEist
how you gon front you the one cleanin out your closet
Ok
your fuckin mind you done lost it
face it you cant be black...even when takin out the frost tips
No, weak
you cant see me i got my eyes closed read the eyelids
scared to face me so i guess you are fearin god bitch
Wtf? lmao
only lines white boy got is the white lines that fucked up his brain
my...i mean your girl went black thats why since she came back...
......she aint acting the same
NO!
your fuckin songs is lame noone want to hear bout your life
we already know you gotta ugly kid and fucked up ex wife
LMFAO....omg no
so just resign as in quit dont re-sign a contract
return to the 8 mile and give your promoters their nine back
no
there must be k-9s on the other side of the beef stack
cuz when it arrives your crew acts as scared pussy cats
'LMFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAO! @ how wack this is.
celebrity spotlight messin up your kid that wotn be an issue
cuz she already be fucked up by 15 cuz she be always hangin wit you
Nah
i gues you could say bullets is what you spittin
but only cuz, like in your encore cd cover, its killin us to listen
ok


V- Dao easily lmao.

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Axe

Fuckin faggot..
Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
You got your eyes on Trina.. I'll murk you in one statement bitch
on a radio interview she stated "it's more of a brother/sister relationship"

vs.

Nothing.


Ehhh. Another one-sided one. Still not much here, but Dao definitely took it with that personal and first qoutable. Both were really up and down though, neither really came with any heat. Tiggo seems to slowly be learning how to do more than statements in his verse, but he still doesn't get it yet. Dao also needs to not do that as much, but he was a bit better here so that's why he gets my vote.

V/ Dao

Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
fucking young ass bitch trying to fill veteran shoes
bitch please..
get on your knee's and bow, wow.. even he did ^ that better than you

vs.

so just resign as in quit dont re-sign a contract
return to the 8 mile and give your promoters their nine back

Dao, u came kinda inconsistent. U had a few cool bars like the ones I quoted, those were good. The rest, ur concepts were fine, but u need more wit to them. Follow this formula whenever u can at all times. Personal + Wordplay = Dope. Sometimes u can use just wordplay or just a personal to make a nice line, but often combining the two helps. For example, the brother/sister line, nice personal there, but u just stated it blandly. Try to combine some sorta cliche or wordplay to lead into the personal. Same with the cash money thing, good personal, but u needed something else to make it hit harder.

tiggo, was looking for improvement in this verse and I just didn't see it. You had a lot of personals, but like I told tiggo, not enough wit. In fact, u didn't really have any wit. U gotta learn to use wordplay n' shit to make ur stuff more interesting. 8 mile line was okay, u sorta did that there, but it was the only one. Ugly kid and fucked up ex wife, yea thats true, but all u did is state it blandly, u gotta add wit to it. Then, u also had a lot of generic shit like the fearin god shit and crew shit, that coulda been to anyone. No reason to not have a personal in every line here, especially since u got eminem to diss, one of the easiest dudes u coulda gotten. Sorry tiggo, maybe this isn't for u, but if u want me to work with u and help u elevate ur game, hit me up on AIM - DaTrusHurtz.

Vote - Dao

lol..w/e...im out, and the fearin god line was cuz of lil waynes tattoos onm his eyes that say fear and god...1

Been with Cash Money since age 11
quit frontin like it was cuz of your sick style and rhymes foo
cuz know we REALLY know how you got Baby to sign you!
fucking young ass bitch trying to fill veteran shoes
bitch please..
get on your knee's and bow, wow.. even he did ^ that better than you
real talk.. your a scrony, ugly ass motherfucker son, I'll leave you dead
Weezy's a throwback.. he's got Tupac's body and Bob Marley's head

lmfao @ the bob marley head line

V$



^well thats everything i like from tiggobities lol



this battle was very one sided IMO

\\// Dao

Dao

Now the truth's been told.. it's impairin ya mind
hardcore gangsta? bitch please..
until the carter II you didn't even swear in ya rhymes
real talk.. your a scrony, ugly ass motherfucker son, I'll leave you dead
Weezy's a throwback.. he's got Tupac's body and Bob Marley's head

tiggo

nothin


Dao has a couple deent lines. some bad lines too though. tiggo was too simple for me, nothin was creative and nothing really hit hard.

v/ dao

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