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11-08-05, 08:14 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Diamonds in the Rough
IP: 2124 1B04
a new track I did. obviously Diamond in the Rough When I made it I wanted to show how amongst the bullshit where I live, and the bullshit I go through I still shine. I wanted to take sort of a break to my usual GANGSTA sound, y'know? My boy T West made the beat. feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213633 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213854 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213780 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213732 *laughs at Hopesfall and Mimesis* should'nt have gave me the beat, foo!
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11-09-05, 01:33 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 4AB0 BE89
upp'n for feedback.
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11-09-05, 02:53 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Beat starts...gawd damn everybody uses sample beats these days..it's getting tiresome. Anyway...verse comes in, decent quality...wasn't feelin the flow honestly, but it works, it's on beat at least...lyrics are coo...though I don't think they suited the beat. Decnt track keep droppin. |
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11-09-05, 03:00 PM | #4 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: 4AB0 BE89
damn fa real?
I aint even know other people had used this beat. I wouldnt have used it if I knew it was kinda played.
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11-09-05, 04:48 PM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 9BA0 A53F
I thought is was all well rounded...the line with internet was tight...go overall flow...i liked it
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11-09-05, 05:16 PM | #6 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 5F4F 7BA8
I Like The Beat But Its Familiar.....Meh
Flow-Its Koo Needs A Lil More Twists In It Ya Know? Delivery-GOod Presence-GOod Presenting Yourself On The Mic Lyrics Seem Good Need to Put Volume Up A lIl(My Speakers R Shit) Overall Good Track 7/10
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11-09-05, 10:42 PM | #7 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 7627 7CDD
aiight beat is coo. Ain't really like much. kanye type shit wit voices.
You come in nice. nice flow... vocals could be upped a lil. lol for a lil while you had kanye type flow, or you sound like him a lil. iunno =/ lol but vocals, yea, need to be upped. can't understand some parts. but flow I really liked dude. emotion coo. nice lyrics and shit. beat actually ain't bad. llol really, like Kanye type delivery fo reel. lol but yea, man this def better then last shit i heard. nice shit man. liked this. good listen man. 8.5/10........ RTF on my run it track. lol
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11-10-05, 02:27 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 9A16 93F3
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11-12-05, 12:35 AM | #9 | |||||
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I already told you, I didn't like ya flow in this shit, some times it seem liek you aint rhyme to it...but you had that ill ass line that I keep saying...
"Wonder why I ain't a winner yet/Maybe cuz I spend too much time on the internet" That shit was too hot... You had some hot lines that you coulda made better if ya flow was on point you bitch ass bitch. I should Sprite REMIX! it. Rearrange the lines son, this beat toooo hot.
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11-12-05, 11:49 AM | #10 | |||||||
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: C042 AA51
ya that line that pop lotty said was ill that was nice, flow is okkkk could be better beat sounds good and vocals good
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11-12-05, 08:15 PM | #11 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: F09A 9D4A
Can I atleast get to the 2nd page, geez
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11-12-05, 09:18 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 69C6 A5F7
beat is ass... too much goin on so its sounds all cluttered.. i dont like ur flow.. very simple and repetitive and at times too stop starty.. lyrics are simple... delivery is ok.... sounds awkward at times... dont like hook... ye not feelin it... too much sounds wrong for me to enjoy it at all
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11-12-05, 09:28 PM | #13 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: F09A 9D4A
shut yo fat hatin ass up.
this song is better than ANYTHING you have EVER done related to rap. and you can talk about doin shows all you want, but the proof is in the songs, YOU SUCK!
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11-12-05, 09:58 PM | #14 | |||||||
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IP: 69C6 A5F7
in your opinion.... more ppl say im dope than say im wack... and i never let beef get in the way of wat i like about a song... atleast im constructive in wat i say sucks unlike u... and u have the nerve to say i hate???? faggot
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11-12-05, 10:41 PM | #15 | |||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: F09A 9D4A
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More people lie to you then anything, then.
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