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11-24-05, 06:29 PM
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^^^ayo man u didnt say anythin to do wit me
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11-24-05, 07:00 PM
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Your verse was a little better lyrical wise, but still not great. Flow was kinda iffy in some spots...Quality was decent. Really was not one of your best tracks man. RTF on Questions. |
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11-25-05, 02:32 PM
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Umm Yeah...
...Fuck Jessicas Intro Word Its Koo Cmp-Good Flow Deliverys Koo Presence Is Nice Lyrcis A lil Meh Inter: Proly The Best Delivery-Dope Emotions-Ok Flows-Good But A lil Off In Spots Lyrics Are Better Overall:6/10 Not ya Best Still Aight
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11-25-05, 02:34 PM
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aite...............thanks.......
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11-25-05, 04:13 PM
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u stole my chipmunk to sing the beginning of the track!
Did you pay him? 1st dude hit the mic while recording.... beat is ok flow is pretty decent vocals need to be amped though yizzer Inter...u came in way to languid...up that emotion on the 1st few lines...hook the listener in ur lyrics were pretty cool I like how u did some of ur dubs ur delivery was monotonous at spots decent track that's promising 1
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11-26-05, 11:05 AM
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IP: 9387 DD01
^^LOL..thank u i guess..........
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11-26-05, 05:45 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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Intro koo i like her voice for some reason  good intro nothing ammusing but kool. 2nd verse- flow was on point lyriks was straight on beat nothing really ammusing, 3-rd-nice lyriks on beat nothing ammusing but good shit,some lines had me like (mm iight) but chea man this drop was hot keep dropping hot thist man intermantal man u starting to sound nice homie keep it up yo (nice beat by the way) 7.5/10 RTF ~1`
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11-26-05, 06:09 PM
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Intro - wuz aiite didn't really feel her voice that much but fit the concept of the song....
1st MC and hook- wasn't feelin his style at all, felt like the delivery could've been better, lyrics could've been upped.... Int. - nice verse, ya elevated from your earlier tracks this year....nice delivery and stayed on topic.... Overall - decent track and quality wuz strate....... pz ~1~ RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435
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11-26-05, 09:33 PM
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intro - good singin
1st verse - sounds koo. flow iz aight. voice iz aight. 2nd verse - u sound soooo much younger then u look, lol. good lyrics. good flow. this track wuz koo. nice beat too. rtf pleeze http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548 werd
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