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ayo im casper tha friendly ghoste,so dont harrass my name.....
its diff then all yall, yer shit looks tha same.....
but anyway heres a story bout hoes,
this bitch kept buggin me to pull of her clothes.....
tha only thing was,she was ugly as hell....
so i told her to go hit up my boi young cell.....
face looked like she was beat wit a stick.....
i couldnt run fast enough,im not that quik
and then i triiped,and got tackled by tha bitch....
she took me down hard,i rolled into tha ditch...
though i got away, but she had me fooled.....
as soon as i stood up,i slipped on a puddle of drool...
that was nasty,i got think of sumthing fast.....
this bitch weighs 300 pounds,and shes haulin ass.....
should i hit this fat hoe?and take one for tha team.....
i dont know bout that,i bet her pussy is green......
i tryin to escape,but imma losin all hope.....
if i go near her pussy i think imma choke.....
so at tha end of this day,i still got away.....
but i know she find me sumday..................
aha just sum nonsense fer yall to read felt like bein nuts tonite

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

Uppin This Yalll Com On Feed

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^this b4 i sleep

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had a story telling vibe to it...that was refreshing


rhyming could be more complex...as well as metas...add them


simple...but was fun to read


aiyo

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184360

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To be honset wit you.. it was really bad.. i only read the first three lines.. and it gave me a headache.. you suck quit now, while you got some preide left..

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that story was pretty bunk........nothing special.......you didn't like being around that ugly hoe, yet you made a freestyle about her......laaaaaaame

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yer a btich wordman so get tha fukk out my thread homo or stop flappin and battle me u fuckin dukker

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OMG you suck.. That is the worst shit i have ever seen man.. You can tell me i suck.. Bud do you really are bad.. LOL.... No really man.. it really is.. even if i liked you i would tell you that

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u look at one thing i wrote high as fukk to make myself laugh u think im giving it? bitch
i dont waste all my energy on a 1 min diss like u ...u fukkin wack femcee
go fukk yer ugly exuse for a bitch
fukkin air thief go strangle yer self wit yer mic cord or did ya pawn it yet??bitch
everyone hates you so get tha fukk outta here already goof dont open your face again unless its to tell me to set it up feel me?fukkin loser

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i dont know...nuthin special...jus there...5.5/10, u got sum elevatin to do homie

-DB

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uppin for feed i was just fukin round spit abouty a fat hoe nuthin great nuthin really put in it just for funny puposes uppin this yall

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yo i agree with the other homies besides wordman and Kesse it wasnt THAT bad but u do need some elevatin...good storyline and structure coulda been a lil better but was still easy ta read and yeah try ta get some multi's in there but i love that u made an attempt atit...nuthin special though 6/10...keep trying you'll elevate

werd uppin this

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