*check check*

i'll be done in a while.....

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aight man np checkin in this bitch i'll drop pretty soon

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i spit tha flow's that infect your body make your head shudda]
dump your body in tha ditch that's tha only time u bein gutter]
the only fuckin time u drop hot shit is when u have diarea]
poison u wit beano and make u shit nonstop for a fuckin year]
take this so called rapper through a fuckin death portal]
that's the only time this souljah is bein fuckin immortal]

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oh my fuckin' god warn the jury the verdict final just got declared...
he can't see my rhymes beat him cuz this nucca is visually impaired..

dis cat probably burn CD's for a living from negro but without the g...
you can't win this you was produced from a herb on a damn tree...
(nothing personal..... negro-the letter g=nero...which is a burning program)

ha rockin' a eminem picture in your lousy version of a sig on Rapbattles...
you can make some popcorn and your verse still wouldn't even crackle.....

aight......

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yo that was a close battle pretty good battle uppin

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damn this was a pretty tight battle from both but overall i gotta give this one to immortal

immortal
damn son you had an iight verse but ive seen you do alot better
punhclines were iight but ive seen better....presonals were good and they were really making there mark...multies were pretty tight ....structure was good and it was almost a tie.. till ha rockin' a eminem picture in your lousy version of a sig on Rapbattles...
you can make some popcorn and your verse still wouldn't even crackle..... Lol that shyt mad me laught...overall nice verse and you won this battle

verdict
nice verse son i didnt expected alot coming from you but your really surprised me ....
multies were alittl off..structure was alittle off to with those ] i really dont like that...
punchlines were pretty decent...personals were aswell decent ..but overall you didnt have enought to merk immortal and fror that my vote goes to immortal but good battle adn keep elevating

vote immortal_soulja04
please return the favor in the battle in my sig thank you

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Aight Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!and Leave Links I'll Get Back To Them I Don't Care Who
You Vote For & Please Exlain!!!!!

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Aight decent battle here a short 6 liners here.....
immortal Soulijah- ya short verse was nice i liked it ...your flow was decent and your structure i thought was a little off but it's aight...but yo punches were nice they hit hard too..so overall Immortal got this battle won with punches....Verdict you came good too...just your punches weren't hit hard enough....

v/ Immortal Soulijah04

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

Verdict took that, i feel that he hit a little bit harder and his flow was more stable.
v/verdict

Aight Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!leave Links!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

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look Verdict u gotta elevate on ya flow n punches na mean cuz it wasnt all dat good but good shit heres da mountain dew code red break down (LMAO and1)

Flow:imortal
punches:immortal
Personals: tie
Structure:immortal

iight good battle yo Vote return da favor Honestly. dont vote fo me cuz i voted fo u n dont vote against me cuz i did da same 2 u jus vote honestly iight ~!i1i!~


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129802
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131678

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

verdict: you 3 bars kind of beat aroudn the bush punchline wise... you didnt jump right into it.. you didnt really get personal wit it...

Immortal: i liked that play on the word negro... and i was feelin ya punches.. but your flow was pretty stretched in my opinion...

immortal won this i believe due to his punches... they stuck harder, and if im not mistaken he had more of them...

v/immortal

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

upppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!1leave links too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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just leaving link -_- :P

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131881

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