yo...

rules:
2 mins max
drop by wednesday
no hata, dr, crew votes

gd luk man............peace

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da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
Blak Woods
-The Peasantry-



Get Aktive Nigga...
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aight hea it tis ma nigga.......

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stay up playa kan't wait ta hea yuz......

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da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
Blak Woods
-The Peasantry-



Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-

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aight....heres ma verse............its called

"Wack Woods"

bw wheres your battle verse whats it called i listened to the first one but it sounded like you was dissin someone else named nickname or sumthin 'ill vote later when this gets staightened out

srry

can i vote..i dont see why not..
fiorz-i wasnt feelin this one as much.nice audio though less mixing than blak.less punches than blak.delivery was weak & flow needs work lines was aiight though.

blakwoods-nice intro.this track was put together nice.almost every line towards the end is dissin em.flow was on nice audio yo.delivery is nice lovin that shit.funny shit dope audio

vote-blakwoods


oh yeah
ima drop for both those battles in a day or 2.pz

ok Fiorz got this.....................................why...... ..............
well had a really nice beet............................aight............. ........
I could understand him better and I injoyed His Approach more...
and well............................It was better than blak...............
well blak woods.................ummm............hard to understand at points............
want feeling the constent gun shawts in all his audios..........
plus..........................blak woods could do way better...............
yeah dogg..............ive seen........or heard i should say.............better..........
audi`s.............aight..............peace....... ..............vote/FiorZ..........

fiorz got this 1....y?bcos he had a nice beat which i was feelin...he also showed his english roots by commenting on audley harrison(english boxer)i was feelin this line alot as he compared his punches 2 1 ting and showing his roots at the same time...fiorz punches hit alot harder and had sum good disses........black woods i struggled 2 feel ur shit as ur voice was kinda mumbly....ur opener was bad and u didnt have dat big hittin punches dat fiorz had..........ur bewat was aight tho.......

my vote fiorz

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*LISTENIN*

BLAK

BEAT-BEAT IS SERIOUS...STR8 BATTLE BEAT-10
QUALITY-QUALITY IS KINDA EHH...7
PRESENCE-U DIDN'T SEEM VERY CONFIDENT AND U SOUNDED KINDA DRY...NOT ENUFF MOTION-6
FLOW-FLOW WAS PRETTY GOOD FOR THE MOST PART-8
DELIVERY-DELIVERY WAS OK NOT REAL ONPOINT THOUGH-6
LYRICS-LYRICS WERE IITE....A FEW THINGS I DISLIKED "IM GOIN TO ENGLAND TO BECOME KING" I WON'T FEELIN THIS FA REAL-6
PUNCHES-.....WON'T FEELIN THIS AT ALL-5
SCHEME-WORDAGE WAS OM NOTHIN REALLY WORDY IN ERE-6
VERSE-VERSE WON'T NOTHIN SPECIAL-6
BATTLEWISE-ON A BATTLE TIP I WON'T FEELIN THIS...U COULD'VE PUT MORE INTO THIS SON-4

OVERALL
MAN I KNOW U CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS...I WON'T FEELIN U HERE SON

63/100 WEAK SON WEAK

FIROZ

BEAT-BEAT IS DOPE NO DOUBT....BUT I AINT REALLY FEELIN THIS ON A BATTLE TIP-6
QUALITY-QUALITY WAS OK BETTER THAN IT USED 2 BE-7
PRESENCE-PRESENCE WAS REAL WEAK..-6
FLOW-FLOW WAS REAL SIMPLE....-7
DELIVERY-DELIEVERY WAS NO WHERE-5
LYRICS-LYRICS ARE OK....-7
PUNCHES-PUNCHES HIT HARD...-8
SCHEME-WORDAGAGE WAS SIMPLE...NOTHIN COMPLEX IN HERE-7
VERSE-VERSE WAS IITE-7
BATTLEWISE-BATTLEWISE I FELT THIS MORE THAN BLAKWOODS..-9

OVERALL

69/100

VOTE FIROI

this was a pretty close battle but heres breakdown for it


black

cant say much good bout quality but that doesnt matter much to me.you gotta good sound but ya voice could use a lil developin
lyrics was aight but not the best keep elevatin son

fiorz

not to bad quality wise aight lyrics could of came harder on the punches part but nice verse flowed well keep ya head up

my vote
fiorz

plz return favor and vote on this battle heres the link thnx alot
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103833