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MarvJay1009 5 62.50%
Orion. 3 37.50%
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Old 03-22-05, 01:39 PM   #1
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MarvJay1009 vs Orion.

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 min check
30 min drop

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-22-05 at 02:09 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
 
Old 03-22-05, 01:48 PM   #2
MaRVJay
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lol timeout u have 34 post...and u made da minimum post:200???....check in tho im dropppin 10 lines datz it
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^^he's scared.lol
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Old 03-22-05, 01:51 PM   #3
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Old 03-22-05, 01:56 PM   #4
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sooooooo whats wrong with that???.................
 
Old 03-22-05, 01:59 PM   #5
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Old 03-22-05, 02:10 PM   #6
MaRVJay
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look....

ya'll think dis kids a crook? naw..cant keystyle gotta get ya book awww
ya lines is "candy" ppl dont reply cuzz u suck they dont "MiSS Da GOOD BaR"
i hope u gota crew fam go get wun of ya boys da come try me
i dont mean da "leaf" if orion live i'll go 2 da hospital & "poison" his "iV"
i aint with games young im grown..ya moms i dont luvin da bone
so now when i call her its "4-HEaD" like da "front of ya dome"
ya bars they weaka..trust me i got thugs dat a pome they heata's
clap at ya legs & leave ya "CaVS" in ya "lebron james sneaker's"
ur a net mc...u'll be on here by da time im earnin millions...
ya cd hott? no u couldn't "PUT OUT FiRE" runnin up in a "burnin buildin"

i rushed it...
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Old 03-22-05, 02:19 PM   #7
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Check.

Opener:
You have no presence... but you're in awe of my charisma…
I'll dispose of every Key you have and treat you like a prisoner…

This shit's a synch I don't flinch, specially in front of this fagget-ass-bitch…
Eh Put ya Money where ya Mouth is, so me-n-my bat can 'Strike Rich'…
Coming up in NYC? Looking For Rep? might as well call me ur idol…
'Fag', 'Slut', 'Bitch', 'Cunt'.... u have the RIGHT to all Those Titles...
tha loser’s circle’s the tool shed, so im putting this hoe in his place…
no skills to embrace, this fag’s a disgrace to the established race…*
I strike like a Nazi blitzkrieg, bark rhymes in German while dissectin' this feeble Jew
But I refuse to make fun of his spelling - cuz evinn disslecksikxs arr teople poo

*Establishment is his crew

Dont vote based on Him being here and known to everybody, vote based on the lyrics...
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Old 03-22-05, 02:29 PM   #8
MaRVJay
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okay....upppin 4 some fukkin votes
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Old 03-22-05, 02:49 PM   #9
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uppin.......................................cmon dont sleep on this...
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Old 03-22-05, 02:50 PM   #10
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


mj- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

o - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/ mj
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Old 03-22-05, 02:53 PM   #11
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nah fuck you...you say the same fuckin shit in everybattle you vote in....same numbers and fuckin everything...im lettin strobe know...
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Old 03-22-05, 02:56 PM   #12
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so................................................ .................................................. ............eat shit thats the way i vote
 
Old 03-22-05, 03:21 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009

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Both verses were hot. BUt it is obvious who won this battle. I mean Marv had sum really clever shit. He won the punches, personals, metas, and wordplay in this battle. ALSO THE ENJOYMENT. I Was LMAO when I read this shit. so I'm givin' mah vote to MarvJay1009. Stay up fam. ~Ghost~
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lmao owned................

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Old 03-22-05, 03:52 PM   #14
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Voted For: Orion.

Marv- yea u did rush it...i was feelin it in tha beginning then u lost me...ur best lines was ya first 4 then everything went down a notch, but an overall nice verse, koo punches and tha Good Bar line was sick

O- opener was klean, and ya lines that came after didnt fall off neither, nice hittin punches, lovin the seconed bar and ya explained line was koo too.

ELEVATION IS THA KEY!!

overall- Orion has my vote kause his shit connected tha most, Marv u can come harder than that, hes new

no hate


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Old 03-22-05, 04:36 PM   #15
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aiight thanks for the HONEST VOTE!!!!..............
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