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Jiamine 2 28.57%
EyeDentdy 5 71.43%
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Old 04-03-06, 11:49 AM   #1
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EyeDentdy vs Jiamine

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Expired battle close - win
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Old 04-03-06, 12:51 PM   #2
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Old 04-03-06, 12:59 PM   #3
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ok...Iv had a lot of peaple request me to set up battles and then never show up. so here's hoping...


If you think you hot...nigga please...I could douse the flame...
cuz half the people u wished would like u...can't even pronounce ur name...
for every good there’s a bad...so spit ur garbage for balance...
I mean damn nigga...you thought hair bear was a challenge...lol
and I gotta filing cabinet of weak niggaz just like you...
U must be saving a rain forest wit them played out lines u recycle...
I'll massacre you dawg...it aint even an option...
I'll make it so they put a censorship tag all over ur coffin...
u got one battle...nobodys even voted yet...
get at me?...u not an animal just cuz you wanna roll wit vets...
17...ur still a child...I'll put u down wit out the night lighter....
ur country’s in love wit Haslethoft...u know that nigga from nightrider...lol

Explanation....
1shit..I dont know how the fuck to pronounce his name..do u?
2He battle hair bear and put all his little effort into it as if he was hard or someshit...the nigga is named hairbear...wtf?
3lines are played out
4just imagine a big blurry ass censorship block over a niggaz coffin in a funeral...thats some shit.
5ever since David Hastlehoft(from baywatch) helped put down the Berlin wall some shit. they been on em like flies on shit for real.
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Old 04-04-06, 12:43 AM   #4
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Old 04-04-06, 12:48 AM   #5
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EYE better change-trajectory, coz JIAMINE flames-wit-weaponry
I replied to your battle call, now you blamin-destiny…
Gutta Reflection?,.. see, no-one wants to roll-wit’chu
aint flowing-fool, this like show-n-prove, you know-you’ll-lose
this is no-magic, u cant slow-traffic by jumpin-in-front-of-it
im loving-this-fuckin-shit, bad wolf? Yea, the way u ‘huffin-n-puffin’-dick
my bullets-are-sleek coz im fluent-in-speech, u losin-to-me…
coz I got words to run thru EYE til’ his fluids-are-leaked
why u steepin-to-this, you know u gon’ be regrettin-this-shit
I be wreckin-these-kids, u realised, now u begging-to-win
Hit the ‘Gutta’ now u the bitch-in-ya-team, need to ditch-ya-regime
The nightmare, bitch im the one that causes the glitch-in-ya-dreams
My flows hot like tropical island, beatin me is impossible…
If u try, I’ll leave u in a place much worse than a Hospital
im maulin-this-fake, flow? He got himself fallin-in-lakes
pentrating you with my sick rhymes, now I got u callin-it-Rape
now watch my spit-hotness, u juss ‘small time’ like kids-watches
Yea, u BANG! But don’t go nowhere, like shit-rockets…
I got you gaspin-bitch, hold a candle? Shit, u cant hold a match-to-this
Fuck it… I replace the damn sky with a fuckin casket-lid…
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Old 04-04-06, 03:20 PM   #6
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ok...lets get some votes in...I understand we both should'v done better its a decent battle.
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Old 04-06-06, 10:25 AM   #7
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please vote people
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Old 04-06-06, 01:02 PM   #8
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Voted For: Jiamine

EyeDentdy - Nice opener, like tha multi. 2nd bar had a nice first line but a whack second. 3rd bar didn't rhyme too well, wasn't feelin that. 4th bar was iight. 5th bar wasn't that hot. Closer coulda been better.

Jaime - Opener was decent. 2nd bar had good use of multi's but not really a hot bar. 3rd bar was weak. 4th bar couldn't been better. 5th bar didn't make sense cuz he ain't really beggin to win. 6th bar was a good punch, liked it. 7th bar was decent too. 8th bar was a good use of multi's mixed wit a little bit of a punch, so good bar. 9th bar had a tight first line but tha second fell. Closer was real nice. You verse was lookin weak in tha beginnin but that last few bars got you my vote.

Good battle.
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Old 04-12-06, 03:09 PM   #9
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please vote yall
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Old 04-19-06, 06:58 PM   #10
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still waiting on some votes up in this bitch......
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Old 04-26-06, 02:48 AM   #11
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Voted For: Jiamine

gotta give this vote jiamine....he had 3 bars that were actually pretty good....including the closer.....the rest was whack.....but eyedent...you had one decent bar...and the rest of your verse was whack..not to mention....the thing about pronouncing his name, is implying that YOU can't pronounce it....which has nothing to do with anyone else..you absically just said.."i'm an ignorant asshole"

other than that....jiamine....PLEASE....stop linking words together...it's annoying as hell
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Old 04-26-06, 08:08 AM   #12
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wtf^? ok ur vote was clouded but its cool. U probably just analyzed it from the wrong angle. thanks for voting though. if u gotta battle u want us to vote on. drop the link.
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Old 04-26-06, 12:11 PM   #13
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Voted For: EyeDentdy

EyeDentdy:
If you think you hot...nigga please...I could douse the flame...
cuz half the people u wished would like u...can't even pronounce ur name...
7/10 - Good Opener.
for every good there’s a bad...so spit ur garbage for balance...
I mean damn nigga...you thought hair bear was a challenge...lol
3/10 - No.
and I gotta filing cabinet of weak niggaz just like you...
U must be saving a rain forest wit them played out lines u recycle...
4/10 - didnt rhyme.
I'll massacre you dawg...it aint even an option...
I'll make it so they put a censorship tag all over ur coffin...
5/10 - ok.
u got one battle...nobodys even voted yet...
get at me?...u not an animal just cuz you wanna roll wit vets...
3/10 - no.
17...ur still a child...I'll put u down wit out the night lighter....
ur country’s in love wit Haslethoft...u know that nigga from nightrider...lol
5/10 - ok closer.
27/60=45%

You had an ok spit, there was some decent shit in there, and it flowed well.


Jiamine:
EYE better change-trajectory, coz JIAMINE flames-wit-weaponry
I replied to your battle call, now you blamin-destiny…
4/10 - ok opener.
Gutta Reflection?,.. see, no-one wants to roll-wit’chu
aint flowing-fool, this like show-n-prove, you know-you’ll-lose
6/10 - niice multi's.
this is no-magic, u cant slow-traffic by jumpin-in-front-of-it
im loving-this-fuckin-shit, bad wolf? Yea, the way u ‘huffin-n-puffin’-dick
7/10 - niice.
my bullets-are-sleek coz im fluent-in-speech, u losin-to-me…
coz I got words to run thru EYE til’ his fluids-are-leaked
3/10 - ok.
why u steepin-to-this, you know u gon’ be regrettin-this-shit
I be wreckin-these-kids, u realised, now u begging-to-win
2/10 - weak.
Hit the ‘Gutta’ now u the bitch-in-ya-team, need to ditch-ya-regime
The nightmare, bitch im the one that causes the glitch-in-ya-dreams
2/10 - weak.
My flows hot like tropical island, beatin me is impossible…
If u try, I’ll leave u in a place much worse than a Hospital
4/10 - ok rhyme.
im maulin-this-fake, flow? He got himself fallin-in-lakes
pentrating you with my sick rhymes, now I got u callin-it-Rape
2/10 - stop givin props to yourself and diss him!
now watch my spit-hotness, u juss ‘small time’ like kids-watches
Yea, u BANG! But don’t go nowhere, like shit-rockets…
5/10 - good punch.
I got you gaspin-bitch, hold a candle? Shit, u cant hold a match-to-this
Fuck it… I replace the damn sky with a fuckin casket-lid…
6/10 - good closer.
41/100=41

This was an iight diss in some places, but then in others its really weak and you just sayin' your "dope" and shit, not really dissin' him at all.


OVERALL - This was a close battle, I give my vote to EyeDentdy thought because he had the harder hitten lines and was more consistant. He flowed well also. J stop sayin' your so sick in your rhymes and shit, and think of somethin nice to say about how whack he is.

Vote - Eye
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Old 04-26-06, 02:40 PM   #14
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thanks for the vote......I just red my shit and I honestly didn't like some of my lines but oh well.
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Old 04-30-06, 04:01 AM   #15
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Voted For: EyeDentdy

yea eye got this easy

I mean dude threw more punches

jiamine had alot of filler and some shit that just didnt do she. jia was just rhyming at times. lines had little to no impact

while eye had a couple of decent shots in there and got this pretty damn easy

so yeaaaaa

vote - eyedentdy
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