You Know Rulez Check Checkity Check

i wont be able to drop my verse tonight im logging off but this is my check in it will be done by tomorrow at 5 pm ~!1!~ and how many bars....?

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10-16 Is The Bar Limit Aight See You TOMMOROW YO !!

i think u mean 10-16 is line limit no one will read 16 bars so heres 12 lines

batter this peasent “smash” ya “insides" like "splattered-intestines"//
put "clocks on ya face" so i could "punch you in a matter-of-seconds"//
I could point swizz to an X and he still couldnt hit-the-spot//
his punches miss-a-lot...its like: you gonna diss-or-not?//
with my methods in skill you could call me a mastermind//
I dont need to cast-a-rhyme, I could rip you in half-a-line//
i rap-with-ease ur words couldnt turn me around a half-degree//
you claim you clap-but-please cock is the only shaft-you-squeeze//
im beatin this nigga so bad that he's trying to retire //
my rhymes reflect heat you need a stove to produce fire//
and if i catch-ya-bluffin i just gotta press-a-button//
ill leave u less-than-nothin like a fuckin breast-reduction//

~!1!~

match my bars
6 bars
12 lines

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in bitch slapped you said verses due at 5pm pacific well its past 5 pacific you got till 12 AM eastern time to drop which is 2 hours and 20 minutes and counting or this is a DQ

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man who wants to battle ill beat anyone on hear

His Rhymes Are DuMb....How Can You Call His Flow InTeLLiGenT...?
Hes =Tormented=.....My PunchLines To Him Is A =Present= Call Him A Bendy Straw Cuz He Gets =Bent=

His Rhymes Are Soft.....You Can Call His Whole Verse A Purple Fairie....
Flow Intelligent Couldnt Get More Rhymes If He Jacked Off With A Rhyming Dictionary

He Count PunchHoles With Punchlines Strong Enought To Break Force...
I Cal Slap You......Give You Ya =Encore= Then Break Ya Face As I Con-Yours

RoYaL SiCkening Rhymes......And He Claims To Be A Vet....
Like Royal Kings......I Can KiLL This Kid Lyrically And Not Even Break A Sweat..

This Flow Looks Up To Me Cause Im So InteLLigeNt...CaLL Me The Lord...
Lyrical Docter Cause I Go Inside His Body Then PuLL His Umblicial Cord...

This Wouldnt Be Able To Flow.. Even If He Had Automatic Floats...
Call Me The Grim Reaper Cause I Rip His Adams Apple Str8 Outta His Throat

uppin for votes will return the favor ~!1!~

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I rekon flow intelligent had this one hey. His flowed a lot better. Although Swizz you had some good personals and rhyme you just didnt bring them all together like flow did. It was close but gotta give it to flow on this one

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I say mali you say booooo

..................I cant vote anyways. To bad for flow

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I say mali you say booooo

batter this peasent “smash” ya “insides" like "splattered-intestines"//
put "clocks on ya face" so i could "punch you in a matter-of-seconds"//
7...nice opener, cud metaphor!!
I could point swizz to an X and he still couldnt hit-the-spot//
his punches miss-a-lot...its like: you gonna diss-or-not?//
6...nice wordplay, but pretty weak still!!
with my methods in skill you could call me a mastermind//
I dont need to cast-a-rhyme, I could rip you in half-a-line//
6...nice line, but sayin u can rip him in half a line, don't work anymore!!
i rap-with-ease ur words couldnt turn me around a half-degree//
you claim you clap-but-please cock is the only shaft-you-squeeze//
7...nice line, stayin consistent!!
im beatin this nigga so bad that he's trying to retire //
my rhymes reflect heat you need a stove to produce fire//
6...weak playa, u can do better!!
and if i catch-ya-bluffin i just gotta press-a-button//
ill leave u less-than-nothin like a fuckin breast-reduction//
7...funny line nice closer!!


His Rhymes Are DuMb....How Can You Call His Flow InTeLLiGenT...?
Hes =Tormented=.....My PunchLines To Him Is A =Present= Call Him A Bendy Straw Cuz He Gets =Bent=
6...rhymin was slightly off at the end, but nice multi!!
His Rhymes Are Soft.....You Can Call His Whole Verse A Purple Fairie....
Flow Intelligent Couldnt Get More Rhymes If He Jacked Off With A Rhyming Dictionary
6...that dictionary shit is so played!!
He Count PunchHoles With Punchlines Strong Enought To Break Force...
I Cal Slap You......Give You Ya =Encore= Then Break Ya Face As I Con-Yours
6...choppy lines, need fixin up!!
RoYaL SiCkening Rhymes......And He Claims To Be A Vet....
Like Royal Kings......I Can KiLL This Kid Lyrically And Not Even Break A Sweat..
7...gud line, nice wordplay!!
This Flow Looks Up To Me Cause Im So InteLLigeNt...CaLL Me The Lord...
Lyrical Docter Cause I Go Inside His Body Then PuLL His Umblicial Cord...
6...average punch!!
This Wouldnt Be Able To Flow.. Even If He Had Automatic Floats...
Call Me The Grim Reaper Cause I Rip His Adams Apple Str8 Outta His Throat
7...nice closer playa!!!

POINTS TOTALS

Flow Intelligent - 39/60
Swizz - 38/60

V/ - Flow Intelligent

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-SwizZ- didn't like you verse at all. hard to understand, and the shit i did understand was wack.step it up.FlOw InTeLLiGeNt way better verse. nice punches, multi'd and srtructure. i like the way you put the link in. nothin new but i like the context in which you did it.-SwizZ- go back to the drawing board cuz you seriously need work.return the fava

vote=FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

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I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

uppin for votes drop a link and i'll return the favor ~!1!~

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uppin for votes drop a link and i will return the favor ~!1!~

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