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01-13-04, 10:00 AM | #1 | |||
Moterboatin Sonuvabitch
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Chrit 8-1 vs Evolve 8-1
IP: 6041 EB2A
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Check in and agree on line amount Regular League Rules apply Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote Matches will be closed Sunday night. Have fun.
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01-13-04, 11:20 AM | #2 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
In ... 12-14 Lines?
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01-13-04, 12:23 PM | #3 | ||||||
Fuck You, I'm Iller
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IP: 843C 2CD1
Sounds good
Will edit in votes....
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01-13-04, 01:15 PM | #4 | ||||||
Fuck You, I'm Iller
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IP: 843C 2CD1
May as well post early...
Who needs until Friday for 14 lines? . . . . . Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight Its you that should be banned... ...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice... And true you fathered a text style... ...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice... And forget sonning... ...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin I mean even ya tourney was wack... Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude.... Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too... Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about... I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick... Its not lack of equipment... ...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip... And the line limit is dope... ...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores And after this, you'll be facing 12-14... ...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores
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01-15-04, 09:03 AM | #5 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when
........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected except its, known you were never respected or liked but we never expected this Dawg........ .................................next time Bark before you Bite & pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken i used to think he was dope too......... ..................................then i found out he was fakin making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar but i hate Spiders Man.......... ...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait?? CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!! so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice *whould have dont more but we agreed on 12-14* edited for spelling Last edited by Evolve : 01-15-04 at 09:20 AM. |
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01-15-04, 09:41 AM | #6 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
very nice battle, seemed a bit heated... i'll break it down
Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight Its you that should be banned... ...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait NICE PERSONAL, not vey well worded though Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice... And true you fathered a text style... ...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice... lol, nice but vanilla ice is played,, shouldhave used sumthin else in place And forget sonning... ...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin I mean even ya tourney was wack... Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in lmao DOPE So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude.... Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too... blah... Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about... I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house blah... And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick... Its not lack of equipment... ...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip... lol, decent And the line limit is dope... ...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores And after this, you'll be facing 12-14... ...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores nice closer.... OVERALL-8/10 this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when ........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written dope,, nice opener bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected lol decent except its, known you were never respected or liked but we never expected this Dawg........ .................................next time Bark before you Bite ok.... & pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken i used to think he was dope too......... ..................................then i found out he was fakin ^ok.. making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar but i hate Spiders Man.......... ...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire lmao nice wordplay... dope yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait?? CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!! ^^best line of the verse so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice ok finisher,,, OVERALL 7/10 well I'm going to go with chrit aka trapt for a better overall verse,, evolve had some good lines and one better than any of chrits, but OVERALL chrit was more consistent,, it seemed evolve used a couple of fillers............ nice battle though.. props to both |
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01-15-04, 10:17 AM | #7 | ||||
I'm an alias...
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IP: A092 9E01
this was so fuckin disappointing...
You should both get beat up... I mean... for the only 2 people to have never lost to me once on this fuckin board you'd figure the verses would be FIRE... they both sucked considerably... I wanna slap the shit outta both o' yous... and Island breaks shit down... Chrit... punches: 5... wordplay: 3.5... personals: 6... with all the stuff we know... you picked the obvious... *shakes head* flow: 1... I'm sorry... I have no idea what beat you did it to... but whoa... overall: 15.5 out of a possible 40... sorry broski... Evolveintosomethingelse... punches: 6... you really lacked here... it surprised me... wordplay: 4... it was no where near what I've seen... personal: 4... Evo... don't use the obvious shit broski... the legend line was nice though... flow: 7... it was pretty consistent... overall: 21 out of a possible 40... vote: Evo'... I'm disappointed in you both... *shakes head n' walks out*
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01-15-04, 12:57 PM | #8 | |||||||||||
-WiTs EnD-
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IP: CB38 DF07
This Was Disappointing In A Way...Chrits Verse Seemed More Like A Defense Than A Diss, No Hate Man But You Did Throw Some Nice Personals But You Defended Yourself Also All Throughout Your Verse, Evolve Had Some Nice Lines Too But There Were A Few Hard Hitting Punches
Quotables: Quote:
^Funny, LoL Quote:
^Nice Hard Hitting Punches And A Good Diss To Him Directly Quote:
^Nice Wordplay Quote:
^Ouch...LoL Personals - Chrit Punches - Evolve Wordplay - Evolve Structure - Evolve Vocab - Chrit Flow - Evolve Chrit Had Nice Punches Man...But You Defended Yourself Too Much In Your Verse You Had Alot Of Personals But None Affected Your Verse Because Every Other Line Defended What You Knew Or Thought Evolve Would Drop Against You Evolve Had A Tad Better Punches..Only Reason I Think He Wins Is Because He Just Threw More Punches..Good Battle Though Vote - Evolve |
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01-15-04, 01:02 PM | #9 | |||||
AKA Cereal Shelf
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IP: 6E65 1B29
Evolves Verse
this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when ........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written bitten? Blah. ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected ?? Nah. except its, known you were never respected or liked but we never expected this Dawg........ .................................next time Bark before you Bite Wasn't feeling/ & pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken i used to think he was dope too......... ..................................then i found out he was fakin Blah. making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar but i hate Spiders Man.......... ...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire Nice. yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait?? CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!! Good personal. so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice Average. Trapt Wit's verse Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight Its you that should be banned... ...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait Halfway decent n' funny. Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice... And true you fathered a text style... ...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice.. Ehh And forget sonning... ...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin I mean even ya tourney was wack... Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in Stretched a bit, personal was aight. So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude.... Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too... I've seen you flip this concept before a few times, not very original. Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about... I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house No. And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick... Its not lack of equipment... ...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip... Boo. And the line limit is dope... ...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores And after this, you'll be facing 12-14... ...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores Nah. Vote- Evolve. Both really dissapointed me, both came half assed with a few shitty lines. It came down to originality for me, Evolve didn't come very played. Chrit you started out aight, then really lost me. Evolve started real bad, but had a few decent lines at the end to win.
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01-15-04, 03:41 PM | #10 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
3-1 Me... No More Freeposting
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01-15-04, 03:45 PM | #11 | ||||||
Fuck You, I'm Iller
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IP: 843C 2CD1
I already said sign me the fuck out
Close this
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01-16-04, 08:09 AM | #12 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
LOL.. I Aint Running The League Anymore... Well I Am.. But Just Not The Way You Think
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01-16-04, 01:14 PM | #13 | |||||||
The Golden Chyld
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IP: 17B3 6207
Vote - Evolve
Chrit's verse did seem like more of a defense tryin' to take less punches off wat Evolve would've used ... But Evolve still came wit some nice punches ... I thought the "bark before U bite" line was wat took this for Evo ... Nice personal if U get it ... Chrit had some sicc ass punches also ... The yahoo shit ... Had me rollin' ... But Evo juss had more lines that did it for me really ... Nice battle |
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01-16-04, 07:35 PM | #14 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: 41E9 3905
v/ evolve. chrit didnt really try here. put up a lot of filler. volve didnt. volves punches were a little stronger. blah.
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01-16-04, 08:27 PM | #15 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: B6E2 01F2
ok....ive read these closely......heres what i think from the breakdown....Each verse from both will be judged honestly. NO HATE! ready set go....
[chrits verse=] Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight Its you that should be banned... ...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait ^ok i sorta lost the flow here but kept reading it...Then i got the picture.. not to great of a opener but moving on Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice... And true you fathered a text style... ...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice... LOL....Witty so far so good.. And forget sonning... ...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin I mean even ya tourney was wack... Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in though i was not watching tourneys a lot...So i cant comment on this line So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude.... Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too... Hard hitting here....Good punch/Personal Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about... I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house ....Im not feeling this....^seems like u had nothing to think of on this line And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick... Its not lack of equipment... ...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip... LOL....Lmao^^at this shit..Witty punch lol good drop here And the line limit is dope... ...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores And after this, you'll be facing 12-14... ...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores exactly...lol good punch/closer.... [evolves verse] this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when ........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written LOL witty ass punchline GREat Opener bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected LOL LMAO...OMG....^evilness is reigning except its, known you were never respected or liked but we never expected this Dawg........ .................................next time Bark before you Bite Lmao...Jesus...Biten shit..LOL good punchline...Im feeling you so far & pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken i used to think he was dope too......... ..................................then i found out he was fakin ..nah not feeling this... making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar but i hate Spiders Man.......... ...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire Good puncline but not as good as the others u droped so far yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait?? CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!! ...Nicely done Great drop also... so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice LOL u did...lol....Ok closer...not to great but good though ok...From the breakdown evovle has this shit man...I was feeling his shit a lot more...BOTH WERE VERY GOOD THOUGH! honestly great battle...We should see more shit like this... My vote=Evolve no hate |
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