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08-06-05, 05:10 PM
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Kamikaze Vendetta
IP: 3240 794D
_ "You must not fear death, my lads; defy him, and you drive him into the enemy's ranks." -- Napoleon Bonaparte Old words and proverbs lead to inevitable actions from which you learn, a deaf ear or lazy eye turned, concern taken from the medals earned. __ Thee Kamikazeaze Vendettatta For better or for worse, for a vendetta or for a curse, perverse actions spinning into factions and the reverse. Reimburse the fractions with cheap attractions and plastic, public reactions displayed by the decay and the drastic. The rich enjoy light and magic, despite the hard-lived poor. Lost cures caused by the core, lost for pioneers to explore. No longer to map the marshes, as the taxes slowly harshen, and I wonder what our blunders seem like to the martians. And here I am, behind enemy lines and hiding behind blinds, armies divide quickly as I provide an explanation as we collide. I ride the thin line, tired after being hired for fires or for clouds, I can imagine the tears and the frowns, as I watch the crowd. And there it is, the object of affection that requires protection, and my feelings begin to lessen, fingers tightening on the weapon. Remember my name, for after this the world will never be the same, and despite claims I'll make a difference in this long-lasting game. I'll board the plane, slip through the defense as my heart condenses, a blocker for the offensive, and leave the world in a series of suspenses. Today, a plane was hi-jacked and rammed into the Twin Towers on this day of nine-eleven, and we believe this was due to a dream of their religion that brings them to heaven. Last edited by Daemon : 08-06-05 at 09:38 PM. |
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08-06-05, 05:55 PM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
word, nice imagery my good friend, emotion was dope in the middle verse, uhmm, good flow all the way through, very descriptive and vivid, enjoyable piece, i'll probly recommend it to some peeps, ya hear? aight, keep up my friend, writing fire lately
rtf on the meaning of the music, me and OSB 
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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08-06-05, 06:01 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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08-06-05, 06:26 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 023E B69D
Dope piece,
decent imagery rhyme sccheme which helped the flow..good structure.. ovrall a good read, keep doin ya thing man.
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08-06-05, 07:50 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanks. I'll get a link...sometime.
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08-06-05, 09:28 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Would you like to up with me? Uh huh, uh huh.
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08-06-05, 10:08 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
these cats telling you that but what audience are you reaching with this right here? not regualar people this my friend in gobly gook for real no realaity at all
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08-06-05, 10:29 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Oh, so 9/11 wasn't real. I bet that was all one illusion. I'm not reaching out to any audience, I'm trying to keep on elevating my skill and I accept real feed, unlike what you give, who continuously thinks that anyone who gives him bad feed is a hater.
Thanks for the feed. Bitch. |
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08-06-05, 10:46 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
i told the truth again you got a lot to learn picture people on the street they won't know a damn thing this was bad for reahing regualar people and look to me elevating is stepping your content up that'll make people want to read your material
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08-06-05, 10:54 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
...You know, I can hardly understand a word you say. When I can, I fucking pwn the shit out of you, and when I can't, I fucking pwn the shit out of you.
I should picture people on a street that don't know a damn thing? Well, this wasn't written for them, genius, because if they're on the street they don't have a fucking computer to get on RV with. And congratulations on figuring out the definition of elevation, like it has any relevance to anything. This was bad for 'reading' other people? I'm supposed to read other people? For other people to read? You're the only one giving me bad feedback in RV or RB, so I don't know why you keep assuming what you say applies to what everyone else says. |
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08-06-05, 10:56 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Dope piece,
decent imagery rhyme sccheme which helped the flow..good structure.. ovrall a good read, keep doin ya thing man. word, nice imagery my good friend, emotion was dope in the middle verse, uhmm, good flow all the way through, very descriptive and vivid, enjoyable piece, i'll probly recommend it to some peeps, ya hear? aight, keep up my friend, writing fire lately very dope...very descriptive...structure was tight....wordplay was tight...imagery and vocab was tight...you incorporated some nice multis and concepts in this piece and you stayed very consistent...always a dope drop form you..keep droppin tha hottness.~1~ Let's see the feed you get from one verse compared to the feed I get from this verse and we'll see who is wack. Undoubtedly, you'll say something like 'people are dickriding you'(which has to be true, since I have a grand total of 25 posts on RB), or 'people are haters on here', or 'they don't understand the meaning of rap'. Well, if they don't understand it, go somewhere else and see if anyone else can understand a word you're saying. |
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08-08-05, 11:32 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
I am upping this like soup in Gorobei's pants.
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08-09-05, 12:00 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo man nice piece right here right off the top 8/10 for sure, u had emotion that was incredible ur vocabulary was on point.....YOUr multis amazed me very nice job with those props man......structure was tight so i obviously got a good flow off of it, keep postin and doin ya thing....1 RTF on anything in my sig...peace
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