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Homicide n syntext....

-drop sum feedback

Beat was unique. I liked the chorus 'We Gangsta'.
Must have been my head phones or speakers because everything sounded low, however I did hear the lyrics you two spit and it was nice.

Everything was pretty good,

8/10

Laters...

^i agree that some of it sounded low.. some of the vocals anyway. Homicide.. your vocals especially sounded like they were low. *shrugs*

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ite.... thanx for da feedback.... still uppin

yeah yeah uppin this

lmao you think you me and syntax mastery ???

peep real music at www.soundclick.com/homicidalthoughtz

umm. lol at you givin this 8/10. im not a big fan of studio gangstas. yall not real with the rap so you will always be limited. the only advice i can give you is be yourself. i live in South Los Angeles. and i know what the hood like... and can tell none of you two have any street knowledge.....

start bein real
Pz.

hahahahah^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


get the fuck out you don't know me or cide so back the fuck up off the shit aiight


uppin for some real crits

^^please tell me....who the fuck said they were even tryin to be like u and syntax.....u reply to give crit...not to speak shit of how much better u are....

ok....beat was pretty good...i agree with Post on the whole don't like the Gangsta scene....hook was decent...just not really placed in the right spot i guess...it seemed like some of ur verses would come out of nowhere in the beat...which kinda fucks with ur flow...and i also agree with Bio and Twizted on the sound thing...but it only done it with Syn's verses...Homicide's came through fine...but u need to run it through a filter...cuz ur "P's" and "F's" were heard clearly if u know what i mean...and Pay.....ur voice sounded like it was kinda distant in ur verse....speak up a lil' louder...or it sounded like u was turning ur head away from the mic....

Overall - the beat was ok....the lyrics that i heard were good...Homicide..u need to go up and get the lyrics for this song and edit them into ur first post......the hook was good....but u both need to work on ur delivery with the flow....

Rating:
7/10

peace
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well dude it was spur of the moment...lol we got two more so far we comin out with so be prepared...

it was koo. -but adjust tha sound when you rappin'. (a lil more louder an' clearer)

much respect

WE all know alcaTrakz gives harsh honest critique

"we pop our collar..."

HOW do you spit like 4 bars off beat? didnt think it was possible

wtf is this?....1988? the beat, the delivery, the flow reminds me of some 1988 shit....get off that tip please...

first cat is on beat i guess....but its not hard to rhyme on beat when the beat is about 60 bpm

second cat...

NOT ON BEAT

the beat is there for a reason.....seems like the transfer from text to audio is gonna be hard for someone.....SYntext...hint hint...

um

thats my honest opinion fellas...

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and HOW THE FUCK does numbnuts give this a 7/10

jesus...

kids...go post this at RM or UGHH or AudioHolics

see what they have to say

this site is SO soft

damn...if this is a 7/10 then....wow....

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^^....umm..u said 1st kat was on beat...then u said Syntext would have a hard time....the first kat was Syn...and i give loose ratings....meaning i'm not hard on audioheads...esp. if this is close to their first one ever done....can't expect perfection...don't bitch about everything....

peace
4:20

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