house rules
im spiitin first
ur drop due withi 30 mins of mine
or its a d/q....

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Ok Dawg Hurry Up And Spit Though Cause I Am Leavin Soon

on rb im the queen..n ur ugly ass aint my king..
u said it yourself...this should be an easy win...
this clown weel illiterate!.. awh my heart sobs..
took the words outta my mouth..im a fukin knob!..
i dont hve to pull that hard on ya lil bow-wow chain..
and u chokin like an afghan..wen givin false names..
your spits couldnt be elevated..if u sang like a soprano..
structure cudnt b strong if u switched from lego to mecano!..
havin 3 n 6 posts the only time you ever seen a nine..
so quit fakin..you aint even tough enough for front-lines!..

ok dawg u got 30 mins............

n voters if u cnt understand my metas then dnt vote......gud luk

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DAMN YOU ARE GOOD ok then..

yo hoodrat sit back// or ya gonna catch my pimp slap
youle get bent back//ill sell your filthy ass to pay my rent slack
yes i am, bitch its hoes like you that provide my money stacks
bitch i may be new but i aint gonna lose to some whack hoe like you
if theres one thing ive learnt from you its that it never hurts to try
while your squelin like the hoe you are im yellin thug life till i die
you may enjoy gettin your brainz fucked out but then again maybe not
whether its my glock or my cock//cause you aint got no grip
you cant spit for shit // so knuckle up bitch
cause you aaint nuttin but a trick hoe and this battles a sinch
look at me girl these raps perfection// if good raps were votes id win the election
bitch ill kill u, u dont need to pay me back//its for free to one BANG rest will die for fun
see beacuse when the sun go down // and gods gone i take the crown
im satan me and my crew rule beacuse im a dangorus man//
nigga bigga than the bloods, crips and the wutang clan
bring homies toghether and unite as a whole//an army to rule beatin others 3 fold
oh and by tha way i hate lil bowwow//but thats no need for you to act like a cow now
ok bitch i had more but fuck it im done// and dont think im payin child suport cause that kid aint my son

wow the is a no brainer
KING_LUCIF through the punches if this was a fight fist punch is a sleeper

MaNiPuLaTiOn keep papin u wasen t bad u through some punches

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

LMFAO///////..wot woz that!
this site real funny sumtimes........


uppin.........................

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Break Down I

King Lucif- Your Structure Was Horrible, It Flowed Ok, Punches Werent To Good, And You Said Hoe And Fuck More Than Punches You Had In Your Verse... Anyway... Wordplay Metaz Niether.... Overal Ok



Manipulation- Structure Was Good, Punches Were Ok, They Connected And Actually Had A Meaning To Them.. Had A Personal Or To.. Overal Decent Verse...


Break Down II
Punches- Tie
Personals- Manip
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Niether
Structure- Manip
Originality- Manip
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Manioulation

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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good battle

breakdown

Manipulation

Flow- 5/10
Rhymes- 5/10
Punches- 4/10
Structure- 6/10
Total- 20/40

v/manipulation

King_Lucif

Flow- 5/10
Rhymes- 8/10
Punches- 6/10
Structure- 6/10
Total- 25/40

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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(tryoutz needed come tryout<-- Sikk Crew)

Who SpiiTz BettaThan Me ?

.::Niggaz cant b original y ya gotta b bitaz::.
.::Push ma buttonz n fiya come out da hole like lightaz::.
.::Who spitz betta, wit berettaz im nice::.
.::Dont push me cuz if u do itz da end of ya life::.

-Venom

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sry bout dat i made a mistake

v/ King_Lucif

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(tryoutz needed come tryout<-- Sikk Crew)

Who SpiiTz BettaThan Me ?

.::Niggaz cant b original y ya gotta b bitaz::.
.::Push ma buttonz n fiya come out da hole like lightaz::.
.::Who spitz betta, wit berettaz im nice::.
.::Dont push me cuz if u do itz da end of ya life::.

-Venom

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weird voting..........................................lm fao

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Lucif ur shits all over the place...
Punches-Man
Personals-Man..way better
Structure-Man
Flow-Man

K Manipulation took this...Lucif's wasnt even a battle verse...wasnt feelin it completely one sided in my mind....those votes were wierd

hit these up honestly:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383

does that mean im gonna win my first battle...cool
yo i aint much of a battlerappa im more of a songwrite rappa