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Old 01-21-05, 02:07 PM   #1
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yo check my shit out!!!

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yo supa star recordz check us out at

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/s...ecordsmusic.htm

vote 4 dam....

diss ya boy smitty

leave somin on the message board!

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Old 01-21-05, 03:05 PM   #2
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listened to Mercy Mercy Mercy Me since that has your name under it...

you seriously sound like you're reading off the paper...turn the beat up a whole lot and get some energy kyd...ya flow's aiight on the 1st verse but 2nd verse you fell off...I'm not gonna listen any more cuz I'm positive it doesn't get any better...work on ya flow, emotion and production...
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Old 01-21-05, 04:31 PM   #3
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yea man turn ur lyrics up so we can hear ur spit
work on ur flow and keeping to the beat
was aight overall..nutiin that bad..u jus need 2 elevate
and dont be so same voiced all tha way thru..get angry or sumin....
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Old 01-21-05, 07:59 PM   #4
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listenin to Gunzo Diss....

real laid back, almost maybe too laid back... you dont sound into it- ur flow kinda lacks in spots, kinda basic delivery- I'd say get more into it next time, and try and bring up the content of your rhymes, say shit that we wanna hear in a way we wanna here it, rather than kinda just lazing through the beat. keep droppin 1.
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