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Old 11-28-03, 09:38 PM   #1
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"My Dedication" (Round 3 For Tourney - DOPE SHIT - PEEP!)

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My Round 3 Vs Lootchiano And Sol.
Produced By: Braile
Written By: Me

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Lyrics
so many broken promises and broken dreams
i dont know if its the cause for this life got me seein things
from a different perspective im decated especially solvin crimes
like the flip of a detective badge, for what i said i had, is not what i want
if i grow up imma blow up to be gettin on, stage movin the crowd
provin to you im loud provin loosely my body moves never settlin down
and if it does, its a break in performance, the way to explore shit,
i hate to ignore it i take ways im real, filled wit skill, a born
enemy with enmity cus im ready to be signed god i want a deal, its been sent to me
the heavenly love, provided me with musical skill straight from above
debatin my love wit the face of a monstor i gots ta show up to rock concerts not bust slugs,
im an entrepreneur
Hook
i love hiphop the music is mine
imma do it all my life, imma use it to shine
no1s takin me out, with chalk on the ground
im dedicated to this rap shit so walk wit me now


soon enough ill be drivin to the city
walkin down broadway handin out my cd's till my... hands is empty
you standin to rap wit me, labels catch exceeding graivty and jam wit me
they see im prosperious willin to drop shit, a business man with strong
legs standin on top of it, wit my mans askin to drop shit, see my fans
will never rep my cause to stop shit, labels say im signed by my acts
that my music is good enough to be heard but im blinded by facts
shinin in the back of an ac, shakled and trapped they got people just for laughin at that
what can i do...i know my music is true, i guess i gotta find some others
not as stupid as you, see i look at the papers, im checkin the boxes, first 23
ask about guns and them watches


im so dedicated, if i told you that years from now would you believe if i said i made it
or would you stand there, listen to nas, cringin ya jaws, music to me is a symbol of god
i still rap for me, still given my all, still standin on my feet, still waitin to fall
i know i eventually will, but ill get up again, i said i was an emcee from beginning to end
still lovin it still rubbin it in, more hiphop for the soul and mind than you noticed before
i was knockin, you just had to open the door, i was chosen to expose my vocals to get you all on the floor
.. now i made my move, took time to make music and erase some dudes, replace some crews, my image
on the map will place my raps in time for me to eat my food



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Old 12-01-03, 07:39 PM   #2
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Old 12-03-03, 11:12 AM   #3
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the lyrics are aiight.
you sound nice on the beat, you sound different.
nice lyrics, nice flow. you gotta watch out on your breathing you made a few breaths hat stood out in there.


aiiight

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yeh.. i have heart problems.. so that = no breath control
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