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Old 10-18-05, 11:47 PM   #1
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" be gone"( nice )(better quality)
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"Be Gone" (dedication)
i left feed on DAUBZ's track,and on LIMITED EDITIONZ bring,
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Old 10-19-05, 11:40 AM   #2
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sounds like ur whisperin


but...ur flow is decent

delivery is lack luster...and sounds like ur mumbling a little

lyrics seem personal...and they rhymed well, if not basic


word on delivery...and don't whisper

and WTF is up with the effect on ur chorus? that is GROSS



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Old 10-19-05, 11:43 AM   #3
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Your quiet on it like someone was in the house...

flows decent lyrics deep and am feelin em, good shit

Not feelin the hook though man,

overall decent.
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Old 10-19-05, 06:13 PM   #4
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lmao chea ! its a love song so i was whispering!yeh and i wanted da rhymein to be like a CONNECT VIBE to LOVE feel me ! but hey
UPPIN... ill RTF on yallz next TRACK!
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Old 10-19-05, 08:19 PM   #5
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lets audio battle
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Old 10-19-05, 10:04 PM   #6
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yea quality is better...good job on that...but the effect on the chorus...lose it...it doesnt sound good...

need to up that delivery...the wispering thing isnt working well with this...

flow is ok...it could be touched up a bit...but not bad...

lyrics are ok...

just keep elevating...work on delivery most...
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Old 10-20-05, 10:42 PM   #7
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lmao yo SPEATS set up a battle kid!
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