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Old 01-26-04, 12:03 AM   #1
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Lirael One (0-0) vs. Def Con (0-0)

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Old 01-26-04, 12:46 PM   #2
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Blah .. you stole your fucking name from a well known head online, why should i bother with you?

10-12 is all your getting.
 
Old 01-26-04, 05:56 PM   #3
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Old 01-26-04, 06:09 PM   #4
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Bitch, the net's your life .. thats why im Sonning Ya ..
Kid had an out of this world experience ..
.. when he ACTUALLY left his monitor.
i'll Whore this 'Vet' .. till just a Corpse is Left ..
Then make you call me oxygen ..
.. when you finish Short of Breath.
My Shits Insane .. damn right i'll Rip this Lame ..
Def Con won a tourney at Prowlers ..
.. perhaps that's why you Bit his Name?
this Fake Fool a Vet?! .. ima Straight School him Next ..
your Neck's not at Stake ..
.. i'll just push a Stake through ya Neck.
this Crack Addict's .. bout to get his Back Shattered ..
i'll attempt to win his heart over ..
.. if not, at least i'll take a Stab At It! ; )
& make sure ya Shroud Brain, gets Bounced Again ..
the fuck you gonna diss me?
.. faggot cant even Pronounce My Name!
Kids been scowerin' on AIM .. Feeding for Tips ..
Here's one ..
Stop at the second line, thats where we stop Reading ya Shit.
You'll get whored son ..
.. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth
See i Call the Shots ..
.. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; )
Admit it .. I OWN YOU .. & this Nerds Best ..
.. are wack name flips, lame kids here havent Heard Yet ..
its not i dont like you ..
.. or how you Space ya Lines ..
it's that EVERY line you use, ends with a Basic Rhyme.
Ima end it there ..
.. dont really wanna offend this Textcee
Cause that way ..
.. he'll go and vote for me again Next Week ..



- The Nigger Molester
 
Old 01-27-04, 06:34 PM   #5
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I only spit hot lines to make it quick when I'm hurtin fools
And the only thing faker than Chrit’s Lines…are this kids personals^^^
Man D- Con’s-fiding the truth- and this kid is a dying man
Dude thought he was safe dickryding…till He…PM’d me his diaphragm!!!
A crying fan, who factually never really had a chance to harm me
Cuz generals lead his verses- I thought those cats led the army???
U can’t spar me- kid won’t even get a touch- let alone a wrestler
Cuz it’s known I’m white- aren’t you known as the Nigger Molester???
I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore
I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four
I hate to make it noticed- but you proved that you know I’m the boss
Cuz you only post all those smiley faces- when you know that you lost

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Yeah, i just threw up something quick. But ehh .. thanks for the votes i guess. =)


EDIT: I was missing some words on line9
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Old 01-27-04, 09:49 PM   #6
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yo....this was a good battle...

check it...


Lirael came nice...i wasn't really feelin that structure...but its ur style...good punches
but some coulda been flipped better...

.. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth
See i Call the Shots ..
.. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; )


like this one is an example...the setup was actually ur punch...ur punch was more or
less ur setup...cuz Sniper in Phone Booth is not a punch...


Defcon came witty as hell and shit was dope...the Diaphram line was hilarious...
and then when he threw out the...

I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore
I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four

i automatically fell in love all over again...

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Old 01-27-04, 09:50 PM   #7
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yo....this was a good battle...

check it...


Lirael came nice...i wasn't really feelin that structure...but its ur style...good punches
but some coulda been flipped better...

.. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth
See i Call the Shots ..
.. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; )


like this one is an example...the setup was actually ur punch...ur punch was more or
less ur setup...cuz Sniper in Phone Booth is not a punch...


Defcon came witty as hell and shit was dope...the Diaphram line was hilarious...
and then when he threw out the...

I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore
I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four

i automatically fell in love all over again...

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Old 01-27-04, 10:16 PM   #8
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^^^
He liked it so much he voted twice.....lol....thnx
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my vote goes to L.O...I liked his punches better..and he also had a good flow..the only thing I didnt like was his structure..otherwise that he had some nice punches..but no personals..

Def Con you had a few good punches but none that I really liked..the dick riding punch was good..and the nigger molestor punch was good..but the rest was "ehhh"..pretty good match but more categories go to L.O.

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Old 01-28-04, 01:20 AM   #10
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Close...Lirael Had Some Nice Punches....But He Went Up And Down In His Verse With Punches....Like Every Once In Awhile He Had A Good Punch....And Def Had Some Good Punches As Well...And Some Funny Ones....

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lirael One
Bitch, the net's your life .. thats why im Sonning Ya ..
Kid had an out of this world experience ..
.. when he ACTUALLY left his monitor.

^Funny

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lirael One
.. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth
See i Call the Shots ..
.. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; )

^2nd Line, Nice Wordplay..

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Man D- Con’s-fiding the truth- and this kid is a dying man
Dude thought he was safe dickryding…till He…PM’d me his diaphragm!!!

^LoL, 2nd Line Funny And Witty

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I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore
I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four

^Best Line In Entire Battle....Funny Personal

Opener - Lirael
Personals - Lirael....Def Con Name Stealing Thing He Wouldnt Let Go
Punches - Def Con
Structure - Def Con
Closer - Neither...Both Were Weak
Vocab - Def Con

Vote - Def Con, Better Punches And More Punches...Lirael Seemed To Be Hungover On The Name....

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Old 01-28-04, 01:42 AM   #11
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I agree with Fue.. that was tha best line in this battle
I thought this was a close battle though..
Lirael only had a couple personals.. from what I saw
But Def took tha personals and punches eaily with that 34 line
Very creative from both.. Lirael got tha multies ..cuz he had a lot of em
Flow was leaning towards Lirael... it was close both were good
But Def got this with his punches and personals

v/Def Con
 
Old 01-28-04, 09:32 AM   #12
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LMAO I think I know who Lirael is... I could be wrong though... haven't spoken to him in a min... but...










I'm not sure whatever one else is seein...


Flow: Lirael...
punches: Lirael...
wordplay: Def Con...
creativeness: Leanin towards Con...
overal enjoyment Lirael... but it was mostly shit I've seen... so...

Vote: Definetly Con...
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Old 01-28-04, 09:51 AM   #13
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Vote Def Con

He had me laughing more... Cam's was good as usual .. But Def's was more witty &
All his punches connected
 
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Vote Def Con

He had me laughing more... Cam's was good as usual .. But Def's was more witty &
All his punches connected




How funny is that... I think we may have confirmation...
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I agree with most here.

Def Con takes this because his punches were consistent and had wittier wordplay. His verse was just more enjoyable. Both came good.. This was a good battle. I just think Lirael One could have come wittier and with harder punches.

V/ Def Con
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