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Old 01-06-04, 04:53 AM   #1
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"ALL MAN" my first drop on this site SHOW LOVE!

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Old 01-06-04, 08:12 AM   #2
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tell the mucka he did a good job with the beat, original stuff. you had good delivery vocally and a sense of rhythm, good topic, a slight lack of multis, good hook, nice imagery.

good work man.
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Old 01-06-04, 01:23 PM   #3
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well this is going on my commercial album...i got multis and punchlines for days LITERALLY...but they're not neccessary in this case...

thanx for listen
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Old 01-06-04, 01:59 PM   #4
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Quality wise its great.. production tight.. whole tight drop... one of the best on this site..

Show some love...
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Old 01-06-04, 02:26 PM   #5
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real nice..........good rappin voice and flow............beat was perfect for this track....lyrics was hard hittin....hook was off the chain...production great...........overall rawness
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Old 01-06-04, 02:59 PM   #6
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yea... not too much to say, nice shit... flow was good, this not really my style tho, hook was cool.. riding the beat well, u can tell it a detroit style i wouldn't-a guessed but u said it... and it clued me in... lol... str8 shit dawg... hit up my track,,,,1
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Old 01-07-04, 02:06 PM   #7
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no doubt ya'll
rhyme scheme wasnt complicated because i was rushed like all to hell...but thanks for peepin this one

this is prolly my fav...next to another track i'ma drop later on...

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Old 01-07-04, 06:08 PM   #8
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yayayya im likein the beat so far...beat is dope...hooK?? nice!!...
u sound familar...dope voice...yeh word on the not so complicated rhyme scheme...but its doesnt detract from the track...kinda...leaves u wantin more you know...sorta guess its me...word at this being straight shit....not a new topic...but yeh...u did really well...quality is great...good drop...
i liked it...~1~
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Old 01-07-04, 07:25 PM   #9
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hmm .. sounds really main stream
production is flawless, haha u 21?
my only problem is u sound like alot of other emcee's but ur shit is ill dont get me wrong ..

lol our group is called "Stratageez Tactics"
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Old 01-08-04, 04:05 PM   #10
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yeah alotta ppl say i sound like so and so...but i have too many styles...this is just one of them...

no doubt ya'll thanks for peepin...pz
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Old 01-08-04, 04:16 PM   #11
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I like the beat-love that hook.MC is tight!!!
shit is blazin njaa meen?

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peep my tracks with the cocoa brovaz,afura and last emp

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Old 01-09-04, 12:10 AM   #12
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thats whats up...thanks for peepin...
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Old 01-09-04, 12:12 AM   #13
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Urban man what ups...It's Bundy...I'm just givin you props on this one man...I check you out over at SC...I'm waitin on an album brother...Send me a copy when you finished so I could study it and steal your rhymes...I mean you know...Listen and stuff...You know...
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Old 01-09-04, 12:14 AM   #14
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shits mashin
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Old 01-09-04, 01:12 AM   #15
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no doubt bundy i checked u WAAAAAY back...i always thought u had skills dawg...u one of the few that make beats AND rap such as myself...thanks to all ya'll for peepin...ya'll makin me feel more and more at home...PZ.
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