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Old 08-15-04, 10:05 PM   #1
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Old 08-16-04, 11:02 AM   #2
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Old 08-16-04, 01:36 PM   #3
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Old 08-16-04, 01:53 PM   #4
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Nice Picture Flow...
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Old 08-16-04, 01:54 PM   #5
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same but i just started on my topical league verse so yeah.....
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Old 08-16-04, 03:51 PM   #6
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why didnt i get a good pic like so =(
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Old 08-16-04, 04:11 PM   #7
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the cold wind blows my hair through my helmet as I ride
so peaceful the machine and I, all is calm on the inside
wishing to forget the travesty I have just created
praying of sins and that I will not end up just as ill fated
My escape flawless, but not stained with the blood of others
people sprawled upon the floor, dead mothers, sisters, and brothers
A tear slides down my cheek as I silently remeber the events
From the end to begining, knowing theres no way I can repent
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The plan was simple open the door, and yell with a gun in hand
AS I walked in I yelled to get donw but one didnt follow my command
I aimed the gun at his head pulled the tirgger and blood splattered
That was my dearest mistake for taking a life as if it didnt matter
As the body was orlled for th theif of possesions the face became clear
THe resemblance of my father's gentle and kind face, was the pressing fear
I screamed surrounded by pain, and outside voices, engulfed by the rage
I open fired my weapon of death, in a insane murderous haze
Yet his heartbeat I hear, I must get away fomr this insanity
What was supposed to be a simple robbing has turned into calamity
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The wind, signifies the calm from the calamity, I relax
regret clouds my capacity for peace, distracted as cars blaze past
A church I see, and I turn against traffic to find God
Was blinded by a light calling me home as I knew what was wrong
the truck rounded the corner not seeing me and clipped the bike
it spun and as lost control I smilled knowing all would be all right
hit the gorund lsiding with the bike through the churches glass windows
alone cold and dark in torment till I heard a heavenly crescendo
blood stops pouring from my mouth as a heavenly hand reaches out
It picks up my broken body ascending past the world into clouds
as I look down on m y former planet from my heavenly hurst
I feel pity for all the pain and suffering endured on earth
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Old 08-17-04, 11:56 AM   #8
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Old 08-17-04, 12:31 PM   #9
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lol...............when ya ognna drop.......iono what to do first.....im confused so many things to work on....
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Old 08-18-04, 10:50 PM   #10
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Old 08-19-04, 02:24 AM   #11
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naw man...drop...ake ya time.......
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Old 08-19-04, 11:12 AM   #12
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No Ones Even Running This...
Im The Only Other Mod Left And My Time Is Pressed...
 
Old 08-19-04, 04:08 PM   #13
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oh....well....farewell.....we should battle as a farewell battle lol
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Old 08-23-04, 04:29 PM   #14
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uppin.....
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