trust me, this might be my best yet
recorded this shit at 1:30 am in about 2 hours. took a 1 hour break n finished mixin it at 5:00 am. damn ima fuckin G. str8 punchlines so ppl dont start thinkin i aint a lyricist anymore

www.myspace.com/thatniccatonyb

Hook-me
1st verse-me
2nd verse-me
3rd verse-me
Produced by-me
Beat by-i forgot to tell the truth but they got a few tags in the instrumental so that aint a prob

damn, s' not finished processing on my myspace yet so just go to my soundclick for now at www.soundclick.com/makevelitrained
*your second links is fake dont do it again*

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sleepin like a fuckin yoyo son

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ok i really dont think im goign to like this beat well its ok i guess
first verse lyrics are ok nothign special but tis cool lol did you say ill suck any blank out there? lmao idk
hook is idk its not really catchy the last im the greatest doesnt sound right
2nd verse i liked alot better lyrically and i think ur delivery was a little better too
3rd verse liked the snap your fingers line even though its played idk didnt really like this beat honestly

idk your musics ok but its kind of boring it doesnt keep me interested idk

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well fuck you too then

heh jk thanx willa

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2 toxic..... i like his beats


the hook is str8... flow was nice...

there's something about your quality that makes you sound like you rapping across the room... bring your vocals foward... i forget what plug-in i use to do that without turning shit down...

lyrics are nice... lol @ mind state bigger than a country..

i see u stepped your punchlines up fam... good shit.. only way to go is get better.. n your doing that.. keep droppin fam..

o n nice rhyme scheme

ok never heard u before so this should be interesting

beat is kinda cool i guess.

you come in real cool with the talkin in the beginning. the chorus is kinda simple and lacks creativity. quality is alright.

first verse your lyrical game is alright. it sounds like youre tryin too hard to push the punchlines out there. your voice sounds like your whining.

again same thing for the chorus.

2nd verse your flow is the same but its alright cause its smooth and not choppy. again with the punchlines.

the 3rd verse is kinda the exact same as the first 2


you did good lyrically. a lot of punchlines and a few good ones in the mix so that was cool. the only thing i didnt like about this was the chorus. jus work on a little more creativity with that and you'll be set

Yes u sexual beast man youve eleavted alot since i last heard you that on the bottom line was phat yeah man i liked this alot good shit, maybe just up the emotion in your delivery but a masive improvment man


hit up my shit here or on r.b thanks man


K,

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Listen'n....

Beats okie dokie.....

1st: Dope punchlines delivery, emotion, thoro
hook: That shit is funny dog...lol LIke it though
2nd: Better than the first punchlines delivery an message
hook: Same
3rd: Didnt compare to the first 2 verse's lol.... but still strong... punchlines bold

Over-all doggy im feelin this track....like it my ratin' fam 6.5/10

Keep it 100

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ah its tony brown...i was expecting an r.kelly kinna beat looking at the topic..

phew finally ur voice is a lil more louder..

beat is cool...not my kind but yeah its nice...


lyrics are are okay..decent...

yay u did it all alone...nice job..i bless ur effort cos yeah this is the best from u so far..tru tru!


yeah i liked ur emotion put in this io liked the way u concluded the track or was that part of the beat?...nice mixing boy u elevating so fast!



whatelse to say...ummm thats all i guess!

props!



hit my sig!

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