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fuck it ill go first so u can feed off my verse/
leave u scared of women hopin u get a male nurse/
wearin a purse with the matchin hat/
he likes 2 give and get it from the back/
likes to lick the shaft then kiss the head/
disowned by his mom she found him n his dad in the bed/
enough about u bein gay but 4 real though ur a shitty mc/
throwin punches everywhere aint 1 hit me/
so go ahead listed the go ahead and spit/
i hope u rhyme as good as u suck a dick/

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my bad my bad. im still gettin used to this. i thought i did somthing wrong with the post. here goes nada.

think you can lay me out with a punk ass flow/
after this im double flawless, no fatality though/
i wont flip that shit, unless a person be worthy/
just kick back, watch you going all topsy-turvy/
no worries baby, you wont suffer too long/
unless i get wicked and throw down on this song/
i'll just spit em at you, like reptile on acid/
got you all deflated, faded, feelin' all flacid/
dont get me wrong lady, im in love with the females/
but i feel all creepy crawly kickin' the ass of a she-male/
i told you once already that you just can't flow/
but you makin' me sick, now you gots to go/
dont show your face 'round here less you be packin'/
and im talkin' bout talent, not that peen you be wackin'/

im out

can we get some damn votes............................................. ....................................

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shame i cant vote but listed definately got my vote,
got rhythm and i was feelin those lines... class blud, fancy joinin REV UNIT??????

we neeeeeeds the voteage boys and girls. hurry this shit up................................................ .................................................. .....

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UP'N YET AGAIN! WE NEED VOTES!............................................ .................................................. ...............................................

Fort Tha Listed's flow/rhymes were far superior, looks like i cud learn alot from ya


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Punches: Listed
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Listed
Creativity: Listed
Flow: Yte
Metas: Yte


Vote - Listed, The

Both of you are pretty close on level, I'd say listed is a little more complex, funnier punches. Yte, you have to be more creative, those lines have probably been said 100 times.

think you can lay me out with a punk ass flow/
after this im double flawless, no fatality though/
Best bar of the battle.

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

O, yeah, please vote on my battle, in the sig, sorry for free post
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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

Flow: close..probaly Tie
Punches: Listed
Metaz: listed although none really stood out as good
Multiz:Listed
Humour: Listed although not enuff to make me smile
Stucture: pffff tie

Overall: listed......nice verse....ytes was ok but i hate all family punches.LACKS crativity to fuck spittin shit like that

anyway keep doin ya thangs peeps

peace