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Old 06-20-08, 08:44 PM   #1
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Yung MEDIkated vs Da Problem Child

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Old 06-20-08, 08:45 PM   #2
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Old 06-20-08, 09:12 PM   #3
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i spit death threw words, your lyrics are rarely enjoyed
treat life a job, and leave this nigga unemployed
how can you say your flow is as automatic as a tech
when this nigga is 0-5 like kevin garnett
and im the kevin garnett of rapverse your the visitor of this place
so i treat you like ray allen did the lakers; put 3 in your face
admit that u suck as much as a vacuum so why do u lye
cuz your rhymes wouldnt be poppin if you were rappin the whole 4 of july
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Old 06-21-08, 02:41 AM   #4
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Old 06-23-08, 11:05 AM   #5
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i treat this nigga like dandruff... i just relaxe as i brush him off
i got so much sizzle when i pop...this nigga gets canned as i crush him off
no homo but i'll eat him since he sucks and all
my medication cant save 'em all
so for him thats a problem ya'll
and if if this kid is a problem ya'll
then i'll just make a problem solved
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Old 06-23-08, 11:33 AM   #6
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i treat this nigga like dandruff... i just relaxe as i brush him off
i got so much sizzle when i pop...this nigga gets canned as i crush him off
no homo but i'll eat him since he sucks and all
my medication cant save 'em all
so for him thats a problem ya'll
and if if this kid is a problem ya'll
then i'll just make a problem solved

i recycled one line.....iw asn't thinkin.....
i had just realized it after i dropped it...
i'm tired as fuck and really ain't focused so go ahead and talk shit...
i dnt give a fuck anigga got writers block
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Old 06-23-08, 02:24 PM   #7
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shyt it really dont matter to me bra, but other people might think differently
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Old 06-23-08, 03:09 PM   #8
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

medikated..
Wow.. dont take this the wrong way but IMPROVE... get some punches that hit hard.. that aren't cliche.. be complex.. rise above the stereotypical lyricist man

Da problem.. verse was nothing special but you at least had something here.. I just dont understand how u call Kevin Garnett 0-5 and then claim to be him???
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Old 06-23-08, 04:09 PM   #9
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because kevin garnett's number i 05, and medikated is 0-4 so i meant he will be 0-5 when im done with him
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Old 06-23-08, 04:16 PM   #10
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

This is a one sided battle. It seems like he ate u on every line.

Medikated's verse was average, no real punches even though you recycled on of those lines

i spit death threw words, your lyrics are rarely enjoyed
treat life a job, and leave this nigga unemployed

i never heard a line like that before

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Old 06-24-08, 12:58 AM   #11
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What! here's some real critisism Da Problem Child: BATTLE GOOD PEOPLE!
because the wack niggaz you battle are nothin u need some real compotision.

but you win because u had punches and you acually got at him

but im bout to stop voting on your battlez unless u start battling good people
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Old 06-24-08, 01:03 AM   #12
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I feel you my nig but i acually look at his battlez and it looked like he was good but i guess i was wrong
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Old 06-25-08, 02:20 PM   #13
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.................................................. checkin votes
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Old 06-25-08, 05:43 PM   #14
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you win caus eyou actualyl have punches, actually have decent rhymes and well, your verse is more of a battle verse.

weak battle all round.
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Old 07-07-08, 12:03 PM   #15
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