aight u spit first 6-10 lines good luck

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k its set up go to it and spit first

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andu sorry for free postin but ima vote on this and can u go to my battle wit canopy and vote again and explain it he had them deleted cause they wasnt explained thankz man

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WHEN YOUR IN THA MAFIA THEIR IS ONLY ONE WAY OUT

MAFIOSO FA LIFE

GRAVEYARD=
OUTSIDER KO
CANOPY

ya i know my bad aight then i will

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hurry up and spit mo fucka
and vip it wont let me vote on your battle says i already did?

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B-More, bout to leave this lil nigga in shock,
He got my semi-auto jealous cause he kissin my glock.
Straight murder this cat wit the knife or the axe,
And some pornographic bullets that'll hit u from the back.
Im a big nigga you belong in a battle wit Bow Wow,
Cause Im known to shoot Rockets and I talkin bout Yao.
Im in the big leagues and yo ass still a child,
Who about to get smoked like a Black & Mild.
So gon head sit back and jus put da slug back,
Its B-More takin over bitch how u luv dat.

1st of all, talk shit in the battle but dont come at me personally.
Thats big talk over a monitor.

what u say ? oh yea big talk my ass/
do u need me to hold ya hand why i walk ya to class/
sayin ahhh yea im a big hata/
bitch so fat , hadnt seen his dick a year lata/
i should invest in some food /
all i gotta do is catch him in his hunger mood/
ill just k-o u to the ground/
o shit hes to fat , now the worlds goin down/
how does it sound , well i do write better/
when im television do u want me to send u a postcard or a letter
it'll say im sorry for rappin yo ass up/
yo chance is gone its done passed up

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andu take this vote, he had more personal punchlines, B-more u cant just kinda sit there and tell someone your gonna kill em or woop thier ass ina 100 dif. ways and expect to win, the rhyme'n wus good tho. YOu both did good at rhyems, but andu takes thi.

Man this is a real weak battle.

Andu= Ya shit was bad but not as bad as b-more's. You need to work on ya punches ya flow ya structure and ya vocabulary. Everything was just so simple. If you want to get some real wins you need to elevate.

B-more= Man ya shit was just bad. The punches were weak as hell. Some of them were played too. Just like Andu work on ya punches flow structure and vocab.

vote= Andu

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yea i know i was just lookin for a quick battle and i suck today just dont feel it well neway thanks for the tips
uppin votes

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