hey i got a beat imm

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/l...ctionsmusic.htm post mre hopefully tell me what you think

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da rhymes i spit, have ya sick
readin each bar givin ya cold chills,
in ya kitchen OD`in on da nyquil

Thats Bad Link Buddy...

ok the links works now please look

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da rhymes i spit, have ya sick
readin each bar givin ya cold chills,
in ya kitchen OD`in on da nyquil

Now It Says The Song Hasn't Been Cleared Yet...

ionno whats goin on but here again is da link


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/l...ctionsmusic.htm

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da rhymes i spit, have ya sick
readin each bar givin ya cold chills,
in ya kitchen OD`in on da nyquil

Wow...

Its Not Really Good...
The Drumline Is Aight, But That Bass Synth Thing Is Irritating...
The Melody Is Aight, But Irritating...

yea i kno its not my best i didnt waanna put my best on here cause i didnt want ne1 to steal it

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da rhymes i spit, have ya sick
readin each bar givin ya cold chills,
in ya kitchen OD`in on da nyquil