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03-23-05, 08:58 PM
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03-24-05, 11:34 AM
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03-24-05, 01:55 PM
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Banned: Biting
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03-24-05, 02:39 PM
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03-24-05, 07:11 PM
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03-25-05, 11:35 AM
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03-25-05, 05:02 PM
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03-28-05, 03:22 PM
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03-28-05, 03:30 PM
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IP: 245E CFC8
Voted For: Orion.
orion IP: Hot Sauce: Opener: A few hours early but No Mercy if Hot Sauce dares to share his worst Key, I immersed him in my verse because I heard this nerd was thirsty, Yo… Kid, you aint at ma level yet, spittin enough fire to 'settle vets' Only time you elevatin is when ya on escolators and pedal steps My flow sends you adrift like you're shifted by it's swiftness, Lost again... so this bitch is stricken off my Christmas gift-list, I am a rebel, yes meanin that, you in a crew but can't really rap... Pop out ya eyes...I guarantee it the last place you'll "see me" at Let's see what you come back with Remember, got 60 minutes, So that should be enough time for Hot Sauce to go find lyrics... lotz of personals liked ur punches easy 2 read structure good elevation 9/10 hot sauce in this Battle im ON TOP, " COOL AND QUITE STEADY",this BITCH IS FOOLISH and READY 2"bite another verse" ,but its NOT like he DIDNT DO IT ALREADY/for SUPPORT you'll be NEEDING CRUTCHES FRIEND ,you should find Sauce's BEST and RESORT TO STEALING PUNCHES AGAIN! You Need to PRACTICE, VERBAL TACTICS cuz mine are known ta' WHIP WHACK SKRIPTS.. Leave ya Propellin' through the air like ur doin' ACROBATICS/My ACT IS 2 Pursue with DRASTIC ATTACK KICKS,CRACKIN UR BACK QUICK,Doin BACKFLIPS..while this styles CHIROPRACTIC/SNAPPIN HEADS n' RIBS,KILLED MANY BEFORE YOU/Your a WHORE DUDE,NOW I RECKON YOUR NEXT wit LYRICS UNDRESSIN UR NECK/ LiKE "starved vultures" IM PECKIN YA FLESH, acceptin this UR BECKONING DEATH...when im through wit u..there'll be NOTHING LEFT!(damn!)! Sauce Holds it "down" like Gravity swingin from the TOP OF THE GLOBE actin' HOSTILE OPPOSED, only SUMMON MONSTEROUS FLOWS 2 leave emcee's APPOSTLES DISPOSED(damn!) orion its "challengeing me"now ur +LOSIN UR HEALTH+ ...CUZ im HItten more HEARTS THAN CUPID HIMSELF+/ JUST cuz IM RUTHLESS DAWG wit little research i KNEW UR FLAWS/with ur Vocab "kids will keep shittin on you like ur "GLUED TO STALLS" (ah damn!) Ill Finish this off by ATTACKIN UR EGO...but We Cant understand ur vocab so cuz u RAP WITH A WEAK FLOW/ You're *'Hittin-with-An-Inconsistent-Misfit' like 'Shaq-Missin-Free-Throws'*(damn)Beef is Personal,Ur Just a CONFUSED DORK...hittin ya face wit Landmarx to have more "Attractions than NEW YORK!!" *Shaq =worst freethrow shooter in the nba hard as shit 4 me 2 read nice punches doe longer verse good personals work on structure elevate 8/10 my vote/ orion ay yall check out my battle vs. the kid 523 please leave good feedbback and a vote 4 da betta battler holla back
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03-28-05, 04:32 PM
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Voted For: Orion.
shit....heres what i think hot sauce....i dunno man, your verse get harder and harder to read each time you drop...really have to fix your structure up, seriously....and using all multies, all the time, alot of your shit seems like fillers because you just end up tryin to rhyme everything....so alot of shit comes off weak as hell, and alot of concepts are played as well.....so, you have the right idea, you just need to really improved your structure and flow, and come up with some harder punches....not bad wordplay...vocab is okay...alot of your shit seems forced too, and you keep jumping randomly to new punches in your paragraphs........its hard to follow like that......but not bad, like i said, you got some aight concepts, just need to improve alot on structure and harder punches.... orion. not bad man.....good personals, good wordplay, vocab was okay, but not consistent.....but dissing, you stayed consistent, and some hit pretty hard, and your structure was great, way more enjoyable to read, nothing wrong with flow......yeah, i think you took this one......but you still could use some more work....some shit was on the brink of being pretty weak, like the christmas gift line <----boo.....but whatever, you still took this one.........RTF, on a link in the sig, or i have a battle in the front lines right now, drop an honest vote if you could v/orion.
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