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Old 12-24-05, 12:32 PM   #1
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I PROLY AM !!


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Old 12-24-05, 09:25 PM   #2
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 12-25-05, 11:02 AM   #3
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beat cud be louder...or lower ur vocals just a tad...maybe 1.5-2 decibels


the Biggie add-on was off beat, so it took away from it. But, as always, his lyrics are dope.


I liked your rhyming here and there. Your flow was good, but your delivery of them was monotone throughout.

This wasn't a good "song". But, if you were messing around, it was decent for what it was. Your verse as a whole was pretty decent.


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Old 12-25-05, 03:22 PM   #4
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beat a lil low....

wtf @ your lyrics lol.....crazy ass bastard...your pronunciation was a lot better on this track...good job on that...


pretty good track...lyrics are what stands out...good stuff...crazy

dunno what else to say
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Old 12-25-05, 03:31 PM   #5
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the sample is kinda weird
good, you slowed down
roflmao @ the chester like cheetos line
the beat is kind of low
the 2nd biggie sample is dope as hell
I cant remember what song its from
damn
the beat make biggie's flow sound choppy
it almost seems like you got 2 beats playin at the same time at biggie's samples man
wtf up's with that?
this is a "ok" track, the production made it bad.
and its good you're startin to slow down your words
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Old 12-25-05, 04:02 PM   #6
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man...mah balls SKANK...ima go wash up..fucked some dirty pussyy...........but yea..thx bro !! /\'n
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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