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02-08-04, 01:54 PM
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...Archaic Scriptures: 1
IP: 9599 AB82
Interpretations of Archaic Scriptures: 1
The reader settles the crowd down and begins to speak... The fact of age, shows on the cracked up page
Of this yellowish book, which re-enact the days That imprint the world with an impact that raised Our very civilization, defined in the fact we pray History’s written by the winner: I heed the victor As I turn the brittle page and read the scriptures ---------------- Genesis 2:7, And the lord god formed man of the dust of the ground and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living soul. Genesis 3:19, In the sweat of thy face shalt thy eat bread, till thou return into the ground: for out of it thou was taken: for dust thou art, and unto dust thou shalt return. The first scripture got to me: See God’s generosity? He breathed life so I could be, & so that I could see His great creations in their glory. I love these stories Because they assure me that the creator adores me ^.^ ^Bitch your beginning to bore me. Did you hear the second line?... I bet in time, you’ll regret the rhymes you use to infect the minds That best define, the ignorant in this world that ingests the spines Of the mindless believers of a hate filled god who promises death You will see his promise is kept...The question is shalt we burn?... We are from the dust so why praise him if to dust we shalt return? Genesis 3: 22, And the lord god said, “behold the man is become one of us, to know good and evil: and now lest he put forth his hand and take also of the tree of life, and eat, and live forever. This is the day man first sinned, and let his thirst win So I’m fully immersed in, the spirt of the cursed men That Adam created as descendants, with his bad start Not that smart, but Adam didn’t really have a bad heart He was just misguided, and was really in love with eve I must say; nothing is more important than love to me He saw that she bit, & new of her doom; “I need you” Were His words, as he also bit and doomed our people .....Better to die with your love than to watch your love die..... ^That shit’s fine, but it’s just the back story of this line Which defines, man becoming gods, and this shines In my brain, as I spit rhymes that will give more detail Please Understand God’s writing and what he spells “the man is become one of us” were God’s exact words But the fact blurs, when your interpretation’s backwards You think that’s when the ties with god began to sever But we really became equal... “take also of the tree of life...and live forever” --------------- All of these scriptures are still gleaming to the herds....... & They continue to bicker over the meaning of the words - ∀rchival Last edited by Archival : 02-08-04 at 03:19 PM. |
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02-08-04, 01:57 PM
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IP: 9599 AB82
Note: all noted text was taken from the King James version of the Bible.
Ps. I hope this was my best drop out of my four that I've dropped. Please leave feedback. |
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02-08-04, 01:59 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
I'm impressed...a bit long..and although the topic has been tackled many times..you managed to pull it off..:This day the first man..." that was my favorite verse...this was pretty good keep it coming..peace...(colors you have chosen are very friuty..LOL)
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02-08-04, 02:43 PM
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_-Lucky Rabbits Foot-_
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IP: CF61 4449
pretty good I liked the basic storylien to this...
it's been done alot but you actually put some good imagery into this... pretty dope... Ps-yeah liek pen sed dont use pink and red they are fruity... plsu they hurt my eyes took me 5 mins to read the pink verse... lol overall good...(cept for colors) [pz...]_.-::SyaNidal::-._...OUT
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02-08-04, 03:20 PM
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IP: 9599 AB82
Word about the colors. [changes colors]
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02-09-04, 08:45 AM
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On That Gangsta' Shit
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IP: 6BF8 0695
Uppers...
-W1
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02-09-04, 10:28 AM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
damn joe u snap raw as hell check nanos reality check
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02-09-04, 10:34 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Nice flow and good word choice. Very nice piece - 8.75. Keep it up.
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