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02-19-06, 03:25 PM | #1 |
hotshh!
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Hardcore Grudge Match: Too Easy vs Tech Skillz
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Hardcore Grudge Match Too Easy vs Tech Skillz 14 Line Weapons Battle # 1 contender for TV championship once determined Good luck to both |
02-19-06, 08:33 PM | #2 | |
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
checkinn in yo..............
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02-19-06, 10:06 PM | #3 | |
Gone
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Check.............................
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02-23-06, 01:44 AM | #4 | |
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
Runnin To The Ropes, While The Crowd Yells And Cheers
I'm Platinum....But The Closest You Have To Go T... ....Would Be Growing A Beard!! Bring Out The Chair To Dispose Of Your Weak Feelings Cause The Only Fan Base You Have... ....Is The One Hanging From Your Ceiling!! Get Up, So I Throw The Trashcan To Knock You Out With Yea Your Leaving Your Mark..... ....And So Do Your Fans After Throwing Up At Your Outfit!! It's Too E Zee For Me To Put You Through A Table, It Stings So Can You Hear Me Now?.... ....Cause Even Verizon Couldn't See You In The Ring!! You Want Jack, Hammer's Ready To Get You Some Trying To Become Chair Of The Company.... ....But I'll Just Make You Run Into One!! |
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02-23-06, 07:35 PM | #5 | |
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IP: EE47 D5F8
Cheers and yells you hear while im wrecking ya face
Rv's full of Thugs, ..............that mainly keep Tech in their waste You a biter, I seen that line about the ceiling yo And why do I need Comp? Tech, ............I swore I passed this about a year ago Skills killed. this verse will leave you more dead Sure he'll walk off with belt, .........................marks across his forehead Fall back nut, once I have you bleeding to death Peeps heard Tech would have a Big Show, ........................look-alike being the ref Damn all the stairs?no just what I beat him with Shit yo ya Techs Killz me, .........................Since I hate reading it Step in the ring, applause, and get popped quick Now groupies are giving you ass since, ....................you finally lost da Hotshh! Arm in the stands asking where are the meds at What you thinking, bash you with a camera ......across ya brain to see wheres ya head at Fuck It Yo It Should Of Been A Simpilar Battle That Ceiling Line Is Played Comp Tech, Computer Technology Is A Class Tech Skillz, Text Kills He Lost To Hotshh!
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02-24-06, 08:12 PM | #6 | |
GG Haterz
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Tech Skillz
Runnin To The Ropes, While The Crowd Yells And Cheers I'm Platinum But The Closest You Have To Go T Would Be Growing A Beard!! Eh, not feeling this punch. Bring Out The Chair To Dispose Of Your Weak Feelings Cause The Only Fan Base You Have Is The One Hanging From Your Ceiling!! Jin has used this concept before. No creativity points, sorry. Get Up, So I Throw The Trashcan To Knock You Out With Yea Your Leaving Your Mark And So Do Your Fans After Throwing Up At Your Outfit!! Haha, not bad. It's Too E Zee For Me To Put You Through A Table, It Stings So Can You Hear Me Now? Cause Even Verizon Couldn't See You In The Ring!! Eh, ok. You Want Jack, Hammer's Ready To Get You Some Trying To Become Chair Of The Company But I'll Just Make You Run Into One!! Nah, not hitting that great here. Overall, you've elevated since I last read your stuff. Still some room to improve. Personals and punches need some minor tweeking, and just some better concepts. Just work on more original stuff. Too Eazy Cheers and yells you hear while im wrecking ya face Rv's full of Thugs, that mainly keep Tech in their waste Eh, not really feeling this. You a biter, I seen that line about the ceiling yo And why do I need Comp? Tech I swore I passed this about a year ago Ok, but where is your weapons? Skills killed. this verse will leave you more dead Sure he'll walk off with belt marks across his forehead Nah, not feeling this. Fall back nut, once I have you bleeding to death Peeps heard Tech would have a Big Show look-alike being the ref Not feeling this punch either Damn all the stairs?no just what I beat him with Shit yo ya Techs Killz me Since I hate reading it Didn't word it right. Step in the ring, applause, and get popped quick Now groupies are giving you ass since you finally lost da Hotshh! Said he had hot stuff? Nah. (And a lot of people lose to hotshh) Arm in the stands asking where are the meds at What you thinking, bash you with a camera No. Overall, you didn't follow the rules if I'm correct. Not a strong verse anyway. Weak punches, weak concepts and personals, need to work on better concepts. v- Tech Skillz
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02-25-06, 12:40 AM | #7 | |
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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thanks for the vote rev...............
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02-25-06, 10:23 PM | #8 | |
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
uppin for more votes.........................
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