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11-02-03, 04:45 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Can any1 help me out
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hey i just need some tips and shit for writing better battles
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11-02-03, 04:48 AM | #2 | |||||||
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well first off........ u needa rhyme
once u get that down well moce to the basics |
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11-02-03, 04:49 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 3A0A E745
arent there like differnt kinds of rhyming
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11-02-03, 04:50 AM | #4 | |||||||
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umm are u fucked or sum shit
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11-02-03, 04:50 AM | #5 | ||||||
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what you mean ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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11-02-03, 04:51 AM | #6 | |||||||
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yes there is...well wow your a smart one huh..
theres metaphorical rhyming..an so on u can have a rhyme like hear my gun go bang// cum on ya face wit my son name the Wang Or basic nursery rhyming which is gay now dayz an wont get u a win......... anything else kid |
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11-02-03, 04:52 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 3A0A E745
what is a puch line......i dont understand completly
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11-02-03, 04:53 AM | #8 | ||||||
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can you like do some examples or someshay
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11-02-03, 04:53 AM | #9 | |||||||
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rymein isn't wat sounds the same.... rymein has same amout of sylobles, and wat u can make it sound like.... but that comes to poor judjment... thats y textin is so hard... some people just can't feel er flow or sum shit... but ya their is diffrent kinds off rymein... it's like a unique style, everyone got one; some poeple just don't know the others style
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11-02-03, 04:55 AM | #10 | ||||||
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so......foucs on the syables when wrting down shit on this site to win battles
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11-02-03, 04:56 AM | #11 | |||||||
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and punchlines are lines that will cut the opponent deep, get to their nerves and hert them emotionaly or physicly
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11-02-03, 04:56 AM | #12 | |||||||
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exactly a PUNCh is
well peep all my battles ill have one or 2 or three punches in More Punches the better.. there basically metaphors that Hit hard.. Like u soundin tite at rap// is like mikeal jackson actin blak.. u no.... OR ya rap games mediocore// ya chances of beatin me is like a fag in a game of strate poker.. u no shit like dat kid |
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11-02-03, 04:57 AM | #13 | ||||||
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like making fun of them
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11-02-03, 04:57 AM | #14 | |||||||
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u can also hav mulites
where are rhymes in the middle ofya lines |
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11-02-03, 04:58 AM | #15 | ||||||||
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ya if u saw some battles have last words like: or-take - mistake asshole - dark-poll shit like dat u know what im sayin dawg |
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