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09-19-07, 08:33 PM | #1 | |
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eh.....structure is a no no here
try doin it like so... rhyme like this and maybe itll appeal to most// and if u got that crack times 2....give em a dose// or in other case u can leave the slashes out and just floss ur structure like when cash is out metaphors and similies help to spicin ur ish up......flow was coo....but u need a lil flavor....concept is played but w/e peep my silent treatment piece if u need some examples of metas and similies and wordplay |
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