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06-04-05, 10:21 PM | #1 | |
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"The man"
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Today...
On top of my stairs... I saw the man again... Who wasn't there... |
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06-05-05, 01:00 AM | #2 | ||
*Im'a Hustla*
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dude.. something.. makes me wanna say.. that this is a very dope piece..
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06-05-05, 08:24 AM | #3 | |
Light Weight
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When I was walking up the stairs...
I met a man that wasn't there... He wasn't there again today... I wish I wish he'd go away... Dope. |
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06-05-05, 01:23 PM | #4 | |
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......... oh ya, thats where I got the idea from
oh well, I bit a concept.. |
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06-05-05, 06:34 PM | #5 | ||
in your system
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deep, short, powerful, raw
poetic scripture of june
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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06-05-05, 07:08 PM | #6 | |
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wow, though this piece was short it said something...so much emotion packed into this small piece...great drop
RTF on my poem...My First Love...please |
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06-16-05, 03:06 AM | #7 | |
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06-16-05, 09:37 PM | #8 | |
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yes thhis showed a great amount of emotion. short but had a HUGE story behind it. man i can think of a thousand ways to say that this is a great great piece. very nicely done.
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06-16-05, 11:55 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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^^ I'll hit you up with some feed on all your poems too soon
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06-16-05, 11:59 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Cheating
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title "the man" haha, fucka man on my stairs, im the man bitches *is saying random shit*
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