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Old 04-22-03, 11:54 AM   #1
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Mr. Decathlete

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Apologies For Tha Length, Ol Skool Ish

Day One

Tha Setting Takes Place In Athens, 2004 Olympics Games In..
Which This 18 Year Old Phenomenom "Hew" Has Been Training..
Two Years In Tha Gyms, On Tha Track, And Of Healthy Eating..
Hoping For PB's But Exceeding WR's Gives Us A Wealthy Feeling..
Day One Begins, Tha Sun Shining Through Tha Clouds Of Greece..
Tha 100 Meter Dash, As I View Tha Crowds As They Increase..
Take To Tha Blocks, "Set", Followed By Tha Starters Gun..
Not My Favorite Event, But Adrenaline Pumps Harder As I Run..
Pre Empted Tha Dip, I Went To Quick, I Took Tha Line Forth..
Then To Tha Long Jump, Here I Hope My Timings On Course..
As Im On Tha Runway, Tha Germans Leading With A Jump Of 6.78..
Powered Down Lane, Hit Tha Sand With A Jump Worthy Of Eighth..
Tha 2nd Attempt Indented Tha Plasticine, Only 1 More Left..
Elevation As I Hit Tha Board Just Added A New Twist To Tha Quest..
6.70 Which Easily Took 2nd Place, 150 Points Is How It Looks..
After A Needed 10 Minute Break, Resumed With Tha Shot Put..
As An Athlete With A Lean Physique, It Was Never Easy For Me..
As I Watched From Tha Bench Tha Guy From Finland Hit 15..
Stepped Into Tha Cicular Zone, It Was All In Tha Technique..
How I Threw That Iron Ball At 40 Degrees, 6M's Short Of 20..
Gazing In Surprise, Couldn't Believe My Eyes, What A Throw..
Second Place, But Now That 280 Points Was My Overall Total..
I Watch My Approach To Tha High Jump, Needed A Spring In My Step..
Here With Tha Best, But Haven't Developed My Vertical Jump Yet..
This Ones A Test To My Mentality, Proceed Towards Tha Mat..
Thought My 3 Stages Were Perfect, But Tha Bar Fell To Tha Track..
Slightly Clipped With My Thigh Muscle, Now Im In Trouble..
Catching A Glimpse Of Tha Scoreboard To Find 5 People Above You..
Is A Cruel Thing To See When You Barely Cleared 1 Meter 50..
Need Something Breathtaking In Tha 400M For A Day 1 Victory..
Tha Thing With Me Is That I Have Tha Stamina But Not Tha Speed..
One Circuit Of Tha Track Is Particular Easy Drawn In Lane 3..
Start Couldn't Be Any Better, Tha 1st Bend Taken Strategically..
Strike Tha 100M Straight In 2nd But With My Pace Increasing..
Tha German To Tha Right Was Leading By About A Single Meter..
Rate He Was Running At, He Must Be Losing Body Water In Litres..
He Was Sluggish Into Tha Bend, Allowed Me To Get Tha Upper Hand..
Out To Tha Home Straight I Was On Tha Move Like Tha Running Man..
Pumping Blood At An Incredible Tempo, Sprint To Tha Finish..
I Took Tha Win In A Time That Was Just Over A Minute..

Day Two

Tha Second Day Embarks Through Tha Glimpse, Tha Olympic Flame..
Motivated By Tha Second It Passed My Town, It Invented Fame..
Atleast In My Soul As Im Lined Up For Tha 110 Meter Hurdles..
I Heard Tha Shot Delayed, And Off At Tha Speed Of A Turtle..
Right, Left, Right, Lead Leg Connects With Tha Plastic Frame..
Masses Came To Envision Tha Collapse Of 9 Hurdles On My Way..
To An Impressive 2nd Place, Behind Tha Athlete Of Sweeden..
Tha Rain Lowered Tha Sky And Tha Temperature Was Freezing..
Next Up Is Tha Discus, Aerodynamic Flight From Tha Rotation..
Of 540 Degrees, Cease Competition With Tha Grass Indentation..
6400 Centimeters Down Tha Field, 4 Meters Further Than Tha Rest..
I Had Feelings Of Tha Top Step, Beating Inside Of My Chest..
Off To Chalk My Palms And Grasp Tha Fibreglass Rod For Vaulting..
Calm My Nerves While Over Tha Speakers An Announcer Was Talking..
Took Off Down Tha Runway With A Careful Clasp Of Tha Pole..
Mastered Control From Tha Plant Inside Of Tha Takeoff Mold..
As I Let Go Around 7 Meters High And Sailed Over Tha Mark..
Leading But With A Single Competitor Still On Tha Chart..
I Had To Watch And Wait, To See If His Failure Seals My Fate..
Almost 200 Points Ahead After This, Looks Like A Clean Skate..
As He Hit Tha Crash Mat, Tha Vibrating Bar Slapped Back..
Smacked Tha Track With A Losers Fury, His Last Crack Lacked..
With Tha Road To Glory Shortening, This Tournaments Happenings..
Are Making Me A Happy Man As I Proceed Towards Tha Javelin..
Where Both Tha Germans Threw Around A Massive 67.10..
Im Preying To Better, As I Have Alot Of Homegrown Anger To Vent..
Tha Spear Behind My Neck And A Slow Approach To Tha Arc..
Discharge At A Immaculate Angle For A Throw That Is Large..
It Looks Heavenly Like A Harp, Piercing Through Tha Gravity..
Damn I Was So Glad To See A Throw Landing At 70 Meters 23..
Thrust My Hand To Tha Sky In Triumph, I Can Never Be Beaten..
Only Thing That Stands Between Me And Gold Is Tha 1500 Meters..
Its Tha Test Of Psyche's And Smart's, Not To Start Too Fast..
And Deplete Your Stamina So You Have None To Even Last..
Tha Complete Race Thats 3 And 3 Quaters Around An Oval Circuit..
Brains And Limbs Moving In Unison To Achieve A Run Thas Perfect..
I Started My Run At Tha Center Of Tha Pack, Not At Tha Back..
So When I Find My Spot Its Easier To Shift Around Tha Track..
Consume 2 Laps Before Starting To Make My Move To Tha Front..
To Tha Outskirts Of Tha Group To View Tha Runner I Have To Hunt..
Breath Control Monitored As I Increase My Stride In Motion..
Im Only 2 Meters Away From Him And Im Consistantly Closing..
It Comes Down To Tha Final Straight, Im Not Going To Question..
My Own Running Ability, So I Was Able To Pip Him By A Second..
Took A New World Record Of Points And Tha Stars 'N' Stripes..
I Represent, Cause Like Prefontaine I Never Gave Up In Life..

WORD..!!
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Old 04-22-03, 12:30 PM   #2
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My Lord! I'll admit I had to take a break. My eyes were hurting. Yup. They sure were. But ugh.. it was a good read ya know? You had great vocab throughout, and good word play, and nice flow to it. I give you a 9.5 you lose .5 for the length lol OoNnEe
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Old 04-22-03, 08:08 PM   #3
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It Wasn't Long...

Thanks For Tha Feedback ASS..Hehe (Is It supposed To Be Abbreviated Like That?)
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