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Old 04-16-06, 09:24 AM   #1
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.J.Brix. (1-0) vs Merkowitzzz (1-2)

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Old 04-16-06, 02:26 PM   #2
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Old 04-17-06, 11:36 AM   #3
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this league, i fuckin own it
while J Brix everytime he takes a Shot at an opponent
^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from
I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J
Merkowitzz the name.. I dont care about you
You lookin Tired.. plus my fist drainin air outta you
..Bitch you aint worth my time or haymakers
Ya crew get no pussy...
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Old 04-20-06, 02:02 PM   #4
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Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock
My Minds Sharpe enough to stab and kill
I can merk o witzzz, witout the game of testin skill
ya mom's is huge,at ya house how you fit the bitch in
her ass so fat,
......it looks like 2 midgets fightin for position
I throw punchs to hurt dudes,while you do it to be brave
I hit'em wit sucha hook shot,wilt turned in his grave
Blastin Under ya chin,brains goin straight out the roof
havin ya mind search For jerry garcia,witout the help of proof
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Old 04-20-06, 05:30 PM   #5
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while J Brix everytime he takes a Shot at an opponent

^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from

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I throw punchs to hurt dudes,while you do it to be brave
I hit'em wit sucha hook shot,wilt turned in his grave

vote: merko...thought j brix woulda took this but looks like half assed this week...the cher in a leg lock line is not original at all...similar to shes so hairy looks like she has don king in a head lock...and never use yo momma jokes in a text battle for real..and the proof lines got played in a week...they was kinda even played even before he died cause i heard sum before then...not dissin u or nuthin, so dont take any of that personal..i actually even think you coulda took this cause i read ya verse last week but i think u didnt try this time around...merk ya had a decent verse homie
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Old 04-20-06, 09:35 PM   #6
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I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J


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Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock


ehh weak battle imo, merk seemed to have the better concepts to me though.

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Old 04-21-06, 12:27 PM   #7
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yeah i got merk on that one..

^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from


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Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock


close battle both were alright. merk. got this in my opinion that line was actually nice. and so was brix's but overall merk just came more consistant and flowed better
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Old 04-22-06, 01:56 PM   #8
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^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from
I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J

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I throw punchs to hurt dudes,while you do it to be brave
I hit'em wit sucha hook shot,wilt turned in his grave

This was a pretty weak battle, both battlers seemed not to try. I really like J Brix's Wilt line that shit was fresh, but you didn't have shit to help your verse besides that. I say Merk took this because of consistency. ONLY REASON!

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Old 04-22-06, 01:59 PM   #9
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^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from
I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J

vs

Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock

v/ merk

and that midget line is a yo momma joke
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Old 04-22-06, 03:16 PM   #10
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Merkowitzzz

"^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from"

Merk you had a decent verse, but shit like that won't carry you far in this league. You're concepts are decent, so all you really need is to fix up the structure and get consitent and you'll be a threat to most vets.

J-Brix

"My Minds Sharpe enough to stab and kill
I can merk o witzzz, witout the game of testin skill"

Brix, this was the only line I felt in your whole verse that was actually thrown towards Merk. All your other bars were just jokes, that we've all heard over many many years that don't even partain to Merk what so ever. That's like me using 10 lines of your momma jokes on someone and expecting to win lol Just step up your creativity and concepts.

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Old 04-22-06, 03:44 PM   #11
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I throw punchs to hurt dudes,while you do it to be brave
I hit'em wit sucha hook shot,wilt turned in his grave


vs.


nothing.


this battle suked imo. v/j.brix
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Old 04-22-06, 07:15 PM   #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Merkowitzzz
^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from
I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J




Quote:
Originally Posted by .J.Brix.
Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock




overall
weak battle...merk edged it out wit his jersey lines...


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Old 04-22-06, 08:23 PM   #13
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I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J
Merkowitzz the name.. I dont care about you
You lookin Tired.. plus my fist drainin air outta you
^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from

vs

didnt feel anything from brixs, a couple decent lines, but thats it.

overall - merc was more consistent and harder hitting, plus fresher and worded his shit better

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Old 04-22-06, 11:50 PM   #14
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I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J


VS


Your bitch needs to shave,i got rug burn makin her bed rock
Her pussy so hairy,
........it looks like she got cher in a leg lock

this almost the worst fucking battle I've ever seen...............

vote merkowitzzz
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Old 04-23-06, 12:56 AM   #15
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this league, i fuckin own it
while J Brix everytime he takes a Shot at an opponent
I'm from Jersey too... we some ballers.. you wanna play?
...I'll snap ya back, trying to put a Newark on the J

vs.

I throw punchs to hurt dudes,while you do it to be brave
I hit'em wit sucha hook shot,wilt turned in his grave

Decent enough battle. . I got Merkowitzzz taking it though. .
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