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| View Poll Results: -..Jono..- vs. AutoMATIK™ | |||
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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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08-19-04, 05:39 PM
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IP: C359 7D74
uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...
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08-19-04, 08:01 PM
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IP: 06EC 43CF
up!
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08-20-04, 04:43 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
uppin for some votes ...
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08-20-04, 04:44 PM
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IP: 3CB0 FA3B
Voted For: -..Jono..-
my vote goes to- Jono they were both good but Jono came with harder punlines and a lil better word play.
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08-21-04, 03:17 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
damm this was a pretty tight battle but ima have to give this one to my boi.. AutoMatik... ...Jon... You had a tight verse... nice multies.. good punchlines... but not many personals... favirote line was :Makin you dissapear like Magic, my spits hit faster than two fully loaded "Automatics" you couldnt write a Classic..if Nas ripped three of his Sentences off of Illmatic As Raps "Book" n "Clock" on your Block, take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch" ^^that was pretty hot overall nice verse but Automatik had nice punchlines and personals.. Auto damn son you had a nice verse... you had some nice punchlines that really hit hard.. good personals... nice multies... but the only thing that was off was the structure so work on that ... overall vote-Automatik
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08-21-04, 03:28 PM
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IP: C359 7D74
ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...
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08-21-04, 03:28 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
This was a close battle, both of you had good wordplay and hot multis, good punches too. But Auto came just a little harder, and was a little more cinsistent with his punches. Nice finisher too... Vote - AutoMATIK Return the favor, honest votes only... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143513
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08-21-04, 03:29 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
Voted For: -..Jono..-
YO I GOTS TO RAISE DA BAR ON JONO HE HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW YO Automatik yo punches didnt had jono flinched for shit! AUTOMATIK FIX YO STRUTURE WORK ON YO PUNCHES YO FLOW ITS COOL MAYNE JONO NICE WORDPLAY'Z
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08-21-04, 03:30 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: C1DA C961
Can Yall Raise Da Bar On My Battle Against Upfront
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08-21-04, 03:36 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
nice battle! I think Auto came a little bit harder.with the multis and metaphors. the punches were a tie,barely . but overall i enjoyed auto's verse a little bit more. great battle! lookin for rd.2
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08-21-04, 03:37 PM
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~Im Cool Like Whoa~
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This was feedback posted for AutoMATIK™
IP: EE7A 8918
long ass verses...
okay newbs, avoid the quotations,they're annoying auto definitely took thishomie get off my dick, my spit makes your "Lips" like Lloyds mix n "Smile" pussy don start reppin yo freestyle, cus U memorized the whole DVD of 8-mile it was weak but prolly ur best one good ish yall why? his punches were way better and wittier, the concepts were also better and the structure was slightly better, jo, ur opener and closer was weak, ur best punch was :
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08-21-04, 03:39 PM
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~Im Cool Like Whoa~
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IP: EE7A 8918
wtf kind of gay system is that
it wont let me vote for automatik for some reason....well that woulda been a vote for him pz. try to get it fixed
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08-21-04, 05:25 PM
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IP: DB49 F2F2
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
Yo im givin it to auto here.. all this shit was mad stretched on both sides.. Auto had some good wordplay.. and punches were pretty good.. nice multis as well.. Overall your verse would have been rated an 8/10 because it was stretched, though the flow was pretty good, and the punches hit well. Jono.. your flow was alright.. i wasnt feeling the opener.. cause ILLMATIC and AUTOMATIC arent really good words to use to rhyme.. it disrupts your flow.. Your wordplay was kinda basic.. but your line.. As Raps "Book" n "Clock" on your Block, take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch..' Should have reversed book n clock.. because the line is Watch and learn.. which leads to a forced rhyme in the next line.. overall i would give your verse a 7/10 cause u had some forced rhymes n shyt... Vote Auto |
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