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roop 5 55.56%
Whiteyonthemic 4 44.44%
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Old 06-23-04, 06:55 PM   #1
Whiteyonthemic
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Battle: Whiteyonthemic vs Roop

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yo whatsup 10-15 lines
no bullshit
no crew votes
no hate votes
lets the blazing begin
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Old 06-23-04, 06:56 PM   #2
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i forgot to tell you but u may go first so i can hurry up and end it
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Old 06-24-04, 03:19 PM   #3
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yo fuck this hes taking to long im bout to post mine first heres my check in i guess its time for me to win
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Old 06-24-04, 03:20 PM   #4
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now i know you aint a rapping man matter of fact i seen you on a comercial for the taliban//
chemically imbalance this shit aint no challenge im a mack pimpin your familly back in iran//
to fresh to be releaseed, let me tear you apart peice by peice//
those rhymes are shitty they make mine look like a masterpiece//
he never will have a good record facing me, his wife said hes to small so shes on the corner asking "any takers" //
rejected by a white guy dont deny you got yo ass busted more times then when the pistons faced the lakers//
why does this guy roop continue to push me, they call him a fagget cause he allergic to pussy//
this aint attack of the clones, its more likes a bitch getting a boned its true see//
who knew that a white boy st8 out da hood would come in and beat this arab, well i did//
you say you from orlando but the magics gone, its tragic to know you even flow, get the towl of you head kid//
let me end it like apu, im to sweet so act like a dog and take this treat//
"get out of my qwiki shop cause you just got beat"//
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Old 06-24-04, 04:43 PM   #5
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yo you said u would battle when you get back from summerschool its 443 and here and you haved even droped is this a no show?
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Old 06-24-04, 05:22 PM   #6
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i'm here now bitch, i wil write it right now, sry for the delay...
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Old 06-24-04, 05:30 PM   #7
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You both suck why even fuckin battle ill take you both on. so suck my cock bitch.Whitey you suck ill bake your azz you little fagget ass bitch.
 
Old 06-24-04, 06:06 PM   #8
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sorry late cuz...

I thought we were battling and not putting down orignized shit
wat the fuck was dat Kanye couldn't even make dat into a hit/1

Three battles, yet no win, compared to u, i'm soaring
G, ur rhymes boring, any worse and u'd be makin me snoring/2

Your flow was off, well nevermind, pretty good for a queer
I'm tryin to be sincere but u ain't never goin to get a cheer/3

Da win is almost near, i love rhymin as an alcholic loves beer
See my sheer skills compared to your mere skills, wonder why i got a rap career/4

Bar five, time for me to thrive and for u to take the dive
I beat u so hard and left u scarred, I bet u wish u weren't still alive/5
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Old 06-24-04, 08:15 PM   #9
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yo, whitey keep elevatin dog, u still need more battles
roop won dis cleanly, good job, nice flow and nice punches to
keep tryin whitey
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Old 06-24-04, 08:28 PM   #10
mishap
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hey this was real close but those punches that whitey threw were just a little bit harder the you roop
 
Old 06-24-04, 10:06 PM   #11
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yo were open for votes so go vote for the best that you think won
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Old 06-24-04, 11:30 PM   #12
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uppin diz biatch..................................
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Old 06-24-04, 11:38 PM   #13
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a roop what happen yo are battle you just dispeared so holla at cha boy
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Old 06-24-04, 11:45 PM   #14
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iight ima have to give this one to roop he had overall mostly everything better then whiteyonthemic ... punchlines were way better then white... multies were also better.... stucture was wow ..alot better.... personals were igiht but i wasnt feeling any of ya two's personals... roops ya verse was good and it was enought to easily merk white... overall this is an easy win for roop... and damn white you really need to work on your struture becuase that made your verse really hard to read

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Old 06-25-04, 02:46 AM   #15
Ca'lam
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iunno why.. but roopys verse was so simple... i could redict everyline almost..
and if you didnt get it,, he was disson on old dudes avy.. that taliban lookin ish.. but yea.. wasent a bad battle..

roop:

I thought we were battling and not putting down orignized shit
wat the fuck was dat Kanye couldn't even make dat into a hit/1
^worded horribly.. mighta hit harder wit better wording...

Three battles, yet no win, compared to u, i'm soaring
G, ur rhymes boring, any worse and u'd be makin me snoring/2
^sleepin on niggas is played out..

Your flow was off, well nevermind, pretty good for a queer
I'm tryin to be sincere but u ain't never goin to get a cheer/3
^ok bar

Da win is almost near, i love rhymin as an alcholic loves beer
See my sheer skills compared to your mere skills, wonder why i got a rap career/4
^the second line.. sheer and mere...the way u used em didnt sound good...

Bar five, time for me to thrive and for u to take the dive
I beat u so hard and left u scarred, I bet u wish u weren't still alive/5
^the wording thing again.. bar might have been decent wit diff wording..

whitey:
now i know you aint a rapping man matter of fact i seen you on a comercial for the taliban//
chemically imbalance this shit aint no challenge im a mack pimpin your familly back in iran//
^first line was good, felt it..second line messed it up.. with differnt wording it could have been dope..

to fresh to be releaseed, let me tear you apart peice by peice//
those rhymes are shitty they make mine look like a masterpiece//
^ok punch

he never will have a good record facing me, his wife said hes to small so shes on the corner asking "any takers" //
rejected by a white guy dont deny you got yo ass busted more times then when the pistons faced the lakers//
^ok line.. the laker part is played now tho..but it was decent

why does this guy roop continue to push me, they call him a fagget cause he allergic to pussy//
this aint attack of the clones, its more likes a bitch getting a boned its true see//
^decent

who knew that a white boy str8 out da hood would come in and beat this arab, well i did//
you say you from orlando but the magics gone, its tragic to know you even flow, get the towl off your head kid//
^notice I corrected your spellin mistakes :P...decent punch at his avy..


let me end it like apu, im to sweet so act like a dog and take this treat//
"get out of my qwiki shop cause you just got beat"//
^filler

both verses were decent.. but i think you both need to elevate on your vocabulary usage... i think over whitey took this.. just barely..his rhyme scccccheme was more complex..

v/whitey
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