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08-08-05, 07:56 AM
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Artik Phrost vs Daubs
IP: E722 4FE7
You can find the rules if you follow this link: !Rules! Read em... Check in by Wednesday Pieces due by Friday Voting closes by Sunday Topic: Broken Promises
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08-08-05, 08:04 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Word,
Check GL ma.
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08-08-05, 11:20 AM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
grrr....i realli need to be bumped out this tourney....so, please dont be mad if i slack on my piece...
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08-11-05, 03:17 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Broken Promise ..A promise is a glimmer of light, valuable in the mind.. ..People swear never to tell, thats not always what you find.. ..Liers are mindless, its all in the iris and it seems your going blind.. ..For betreyal exists inside, than one silent whisper, can damage ones pride.. People insert there trust with words, and share it for once.. But this dioulouge isnt speech, the hearts where its from.. Close friends lie, all of a sudden the gold changes to bronze.. My heart is broken, like somebody threw away the drums.. I take what comes, but will never get over it, my trust was abused.. Ive been used and twisted and all behind my back, i can see the clues.. You could have been honest, and i wouldnt feel this way.. Im gonna make you pay, theres no excuse i dont care what you say.. This is the end of your days, it may seem extravagent.. But it feels like you drowned me, so im dragging-you-in.. You abused my trust, its only fair that I abuse your life.. The only settlement was to set on you with my knife.. ..Extremeties occur when betreyal exists.. ..Anyone who concurs can only be mindless.. ..For that broken promise represents more than words.. ..Its a bond, that can all be understood from reading this verse..
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08-12-05, 11:26 AM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
Topic: Broken Promises
.Broken Promises.
By: Artik Phrost Light Slips Slowly Out My Eye’s Sight My Life Slips Slowly Out My Eye’s Sight A Slight Smile Shatters Mother’s Ailing Heart I Stare At The Ceiling Waiting For Heaven To Break Apart ‘..A Comatose Like State Grabs Josh……… Foreshadow: Josh’s Funeral A Torn Mother Approaches The Casket: …My Third Son; The Onli One Who Promised To Make It To The Other Side; Not What I Had In Mind, Lord Why’d Yu Take Him? …A Smart Man, Whose Presence Was Calm Yet Intimidatin Like The Seas In School He Always Stayed At ‘B-A..Y?’ Because My Baby Didn’t Like The C’s *WHY LORD?...WHY???!!!! A Heart Broken Girlfriend Approaches The Casket: …How Can Yu Do This To Me Now?..Just Turn Our Life Around Yu Got Me Here Waiting For Yu To Come To Life Like This Unborn Child …I Loved Yu Josh, LOVED!..I Thought The Feelings Were Mutual And, Now Im Walking Down The Isle, Not At Our Wedding But Yur Funeral *My Baby…My Love…WHYYY??!!! A Betrayed Best Friend Approaches The Casket: …Nigga, Shit Just Aint The Same Without Yu On The 3rd Ya Homies Tipped Liquor For Yu, But The Onli Thing Suppressed Was The Curb …Man, Yu Promised To Never Leave Us, This Is Interesting I Guess Its True When Said That Even Your Best Friend Can Turn Into An Enemy *See Yu In Hell, Bruh A Let Down Little Brother Approaches The Casket: …Why Yu Have To Leave Me; Time Is Important Yu Cant Expect Moma To Tell Me Whats What About Courtin' …I Looked Up To Yu Bro; Why Yu Being A Selfish Twerp? If I Grow Up To Be A Fag Now; I Hope Yu Know Its Yur Fault…JERK!! *Yu Promised To Teach Me….Why??? Josh’s Soul Approaches The Casket: …Yu Promised Life Wouldn’t Get Us; The Streets Wouldnt Quit Us So Tell Me Why Yu Laying Here With Ya Fam Hurt; All Fucken Slit Up? …What Happened To That Ring For Jas? Tony’s 1st Box Of Rubbers? Or That Determined Strive That Burned Inside To Get Moms Out The Gutter? …Yu Had A Lot Going Josh; Dying? Yu Think It Was Realli Time To? Yu Wanted To Go Out In Style..Hell I Thought Yu Would’ve Finished High School ‘..Josh Comes To Conscience A Little Bit… While The Knife Slips Slowly Out My Eye’s Sight Hard Knock Hype Slips Slowly Out My Mind’s Sight My Smile Shatters Thinking Of Fun Times I’ll Miss As I Stare At The Ceiling Wondering If Heaven Keeps Its Promises
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08-12-05, 11:52 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Nice nice, good luck.
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08-12-05, 11:59 AM
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IP: 6E69 7B24
^yep...im kinda hopin i get bumped out....so i aint realli put my all into it...
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08-13-05, 11:44 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
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08-13-05, 08:01 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
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08-13-05, 09:00 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: BC3E E567
Poo Poo........
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08-13-05, 09:01 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Thanks, now please vote
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08-15-05, 09:55 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 2AD8 B7B2
I believe someone voted for Artik Phrost before the server went down.
Artik Phrost advances to the semi-finals
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