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07-21-08, 10:11 PM
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Whys That?
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Closed Eyes
IP: 651E B56A
Closed Eyes
By Got Soul? ©  Some say there’s 7 Wonders of the Natural Earth, I beg to differ. Beautiful melody dances with echoes in a fine harmonic tune Each octave rotates perfect, naturally synchronized with the moon His blinking lives up the room, a talented mind stuck in gloom Finger tips delicately placed releasing a guy’s subtle mood Swaying ecstatic brain left to right, but he’s far from saying no Amazing Grace blessed the night, his heart rate pace is slow….. *pause* Hands slap down violently, attacking, abusing blacks and whites A seriously passionate movement in the heat of the act tonight Majors and minors released to the ear when extracted right Gasp for hype, magic created with the exact same hands that type Explosive notes openly written to a crowed of perpetual civilians Escaping a force fed reality, a mans heart isn’t beating, its living this Excitement exits the voice box to dance dramatically with tonsils Lights dim synchronized with a ere silence …everything’s gone still Whispers vibrate a vibrant arena, humans stand anxiously impatient Low voices turn to chants, questions ask ‘were the mans face is’ Blinding lights shine like crepuscular rays, reality confronts the crowed A man sits dark glasses skill level that would make god proud Finger tips caressing keys in alignment, creating heavens leading note Deceptive cadence anticipates smoothly, creating a breathing hope Semitones hang in the balance like a talented tight rope trapeze One man generating an orchestral similarity produced frequent with ease Blissful sounds of Enharmonic Intervals emit joy and excitement Vision of Espressivo, views of love, from a man who lives sightless Dedicated to Stevie Wonder, The man that see’s more than you and I Even though he lives with Closed Eyes. |
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07-21-08, 10:13 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 651E B56A
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07-24-08, 05:16 PM
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New Jack
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IP: 758C 908A
Vocab was done to perfect in this piece and really flowed well. This is a problem I usually have with my writings, but you've compose this piece very good and the length of this piece can actually keep the audience stimulated and wanting more...
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LPMNDCTE The B.E.S.T. Crew .................. |
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07-24-08, 08:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 90F4 56AA
I enjoyed this... Thought the topic itself was dope and original
Flow was on point Vocab was sick though coulda had more multi's Other than that, dope |
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08-03-08, 02:21 PM
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I made it and il end it
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IP: CAB7 929E
Great vocab dude, flowed without any effort at all.Good topic you used here and stayed on topic throughout.Really enjoyed reading this piece + i must say i was'nt too surprized to see another well put together piece from you got soul.
cant really see how you could improve it. Great work. Keep it up yeah. Peace |
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08-11-08, 12:02 PM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 61C0 7C7E
^^^bumpin'.
soul, im gonna peep this and return the proper feed when i wake up in a few hours. im far too tired to read anymore text at this moment my crhymie. *offers a freshly baked cookie.* s.v., crhyme sindo
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 QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE  "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown  R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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