i spit illness..you can see it in my words..
rhyme master, cast a spell on these nerds
you just cannot beat the. best im no1 to test..
step to me, get ur face recked. and brain messed
u fuckers cant spit deep. mc's jump out leap
b4 i bust in wid shots. that'll leave u 6 foot deep
i got so many sick thoughts to torcher u
and each thought dat i get automatically slaughter u
haha u noobs. suck, so much, i find it funny...
dont ever disrespect me in any form wotsoever
cuz im ready to take control and blow ur ass like weather haa
flows tighter, burn u like a lighter..set u on fire bitch
call me a lier i'll rip an mc apart.. like barbed wire hmm

fuck dis i need a crew to start... anybody down wid aka sinner... i need to speak wid mad dog so can u speak up here..

you need to spell your words right so your drop at least looks respectable..

this was ok..

6/10

ur flow was oookay but could of been much better by useing multis that also help the flow...
concept was eeeh wasnt feeling it to much sorry fam...
the material didnt seem to good of a read either but ur flow was the best thing here i only speak the truth but u def can get better with practis and by useing multis also make sure ur SETUP lines are properly followed by a good DELIEVERY PUNCH that makes the verse fire....

good luck and keep droping them...

2 links or fuck off.

^^It's the polite phrasing which cracks me up^^

This was pretty basic, the topic was some standard stuff and the rhyme scheme was simplistic. A couple of lines didn't rhyme and the spelling was off in places, fair enough this isn't an english lessons but it makes to easier on the eyes when everythings spelt right. Try to boost your vocab and tackle a more original topic.

Keep posting, keep elavating and please rtf.

Still waiting for our battle tech so.................

SET it UP..................

wasnt feeling the flow got to work on creativity and vocabulary

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