Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-05 at 05:12 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Micsachek has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-05 05:14 PM.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-05 05:30 PM.

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*

*1-"diggers" is a fictional book (havent red it though loool)
*2-talkin bout the film "coach carter" cuz Samuel Jackson's the coach in that
*3-luk at his name

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one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/

could we get some people to vote on this so it can get locked....

as soon as we can get votes the better, votes would be very honorable

ok fuck, i replied to like 8 battles left some links and no one votes still, what does it take to get a vote smfh

Voted For: Micsachek

Micsacheck

one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
Decent wordplay.. no punch..
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
Still decent wordplay.. but the punch isn't there..
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
Ehh.. Average..
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
The concept was good.. the wording wasn't..
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
Really simple wordplay.. no punch..
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
Nah..
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/
Didn't connect..

One Mic

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
Concept was decent.. wording was off..
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story
Concept was pretty good.. but didn't apply to a battle..
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson
Nah..
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!
Decent..

Overall, this battle came out to be pretty close. Micachek had more "decent" lines, but also more lines that weren't that good. But, when it comes down to it, Micsachek had a more solid verse and that's why I'm giving him the vote. One Mic, you should sign up for the Punchline League.. You can elevate without having battles go on your record. Word.

Vote - Micsachek

uppin votes, anyone else? thanx for voting mim, at least someone had the decentcy to vote

uppin, this battle coiuld be over but no one votes

yer man. thanx for votin M newayz, alot of cats dont vote these days. uppin this................

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Voted For: one mic

one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
2....poor rhyming..zero flow..weak punch
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
3...weak,horrible concept.
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
4...1st line is played..2nd is blah
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
5...decent.
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
1...no,this was a threat...not a punch.
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
3...weak..set-up needs relevance.
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/
3...weak..self glorifing.

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
4...rippin on avys is kinda blah now,but a personal is a personal..
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
3...wack
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
4...ok,but try not to explain ur punches..
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*
6....good punch.

Ok..Micsachek went more lines..but,it's quality over quantity.
And one mic got it.
Micsachek had played shit..like the mic-hot line and edward scissor hands.Also..shorten ur lines up cus ya flow is awful.It picked up near the end..but at the begining..it wuz horrid.

Vote-One Mic
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209572

thanx for votin man appreciate it, imma rtf in ur battle now. uppin for more votes.......

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