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10-11-05, 06:09 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
You're Style's Not Hard
... My Style Was Raised On That And Then I Branched Off. I Started Out On A Site Called SixShot.Com, The Main Thing We Have There Is Organized Multies. That Style Is Played And Restrictive To Contents Though. |
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10-11-05, 07:53 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
this was a very solid peice.. i liked it.. nice verses and yeah the shooting was a bit unexpected.. good work keep it up
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10-11-05, 04:03 PM
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#18
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1926
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanks Man,
... Upping. |
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10-12-05, 05:52 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: ECBC D25F
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10-12-05, 06:33 PM
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IP: 3475 61F6
lovin this piece Atticus...cool ass shit,i was feelin it and it woulda been cool if it was a little longer but still a great piece of work...keep at it cuz you nice as fuck at this...hit me back homie
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10-12-05, 07:44 PM
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IP: 0FD1 522B
this piece is very dope yo..
the structure is dope the imagery is super sick..its like your there.. anyways, keep doing wutchu do famm..hot shit fahreal 9/10 all love no hate -1- |
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10-14-05, 06:22 AM
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1926
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanks Alot For The Feedback.
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10-15-05, 06:28 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
flow was good vocab could be better but overall i liked it 7/10
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10-15-05, 07:57 PM
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1926
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IP: 0825 899A
Rv Is Garbage At Feedback.
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10-16-05, 01:36 AM
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Miss Me?
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IP: E09E F175
Long read. It wasnt an amazing, perfect piece. It was good though. You really forced your vocab and I didnt like that. It through off the flow and made it seem at some points you didnt even know what you were saying. Your rhyming was also very meh. Some things didnt rhyme at all. You didnt have many internals so that didnt help. The storyline was nice but you fell off in spots. It seemed to ramble on and I got bored in some areas of it. The imagery was a strong point. You did make stuff clear so I could understand it and that saved your piece. Overall it was a very mediocre piece in my opinion. My favorite lines were this..
"So Blind To Me Until The Time Of Need... Now It Is I With Eyes Wide Shut And Blind Prestige." So anyways I've seen better from you. Please hit up the link in my sig. Thanks bro
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10-17-05, 07:05 PM
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IP: 1C36 B0A6
heh. yup this is an excellent drop. like always the intensity of your style blows me away. its very good. the flow was perect mostly. fell of a couple of times but didn't matter cuz your lines made up for it. it isn't that complex. a little simple but keep writing. I'll always read your drops.
RTF
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