5-10 Lines Lets Make It Short u Spit First gl hf i set up

im just waiting for you now popa doc spit when ur ready

ayo mc dip shit can't even spit, needs to drink his own piss b4 he can shit/
i'll grind on you like a skateboard, that landed in the side of your head/
insead, i will remove your skeleton, fry it in a microwave for my dog to chew/
you'll see me force feeding you cocain up ur nostrals, stickin pins in your testicals/
i'll spin you away like a turntable, put your head as a record n mix u up/
i'll rip ur vocal chords out, stringing them hanging, start bashing you wid em whippin ur ass/
i don't care that im first spittin, its so easy to diss mc dip shit dissin/
dis low life couldn't take anything away from me, he'll be robbed first before he can do that/
you've been puntured forcefully like a bike got puntured by a spike/
a stake would be better, rip into you like count dracular/

Yo Yo Im Mc DiP , U Got It Dude I Am A Dip Shit
Now Its My Turn Ill Make Ya Have A Fit!!!!!!!!!
Yo.. Why You On About My Testicals? U Want Sum?
Now U Now Why U Aint Been Able To Cum!!!!
Popa Doc?? Got That Off 8 Mile U Prick....
I Felt Dodgy I Was Going To Call You Dick...
Ur Battle Was Shit U Probly Got It On A Serial Box
Mine Aint Great But According To YOurs It Rox!
Im Getting Bored Of You Already You Fuckin Dime!
IM Sorry Uve Lost Try Harder The Next Time!!

Thanks No Affense Are Nothing Mc DiP gl

please both get of the bord...dis is embrasing to read...its soooo wack..both r so wack...both of u had nufin gd both ur verses..there both shit...but if i had to chose it wld be dip....i spose he had a little structure...dats it....pap doc if dats wot u call ur sef...all ur second lines dindt even fuckin rhyme...and to fink u thought u cld beat me..mufucker u cldnt beat no1...
v/ dip..

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^wack as fuck......................popa doc uve had 7or 8 battles.....if ur still that shit...u need 2 quit....mc dip...well at least u had structure and it rhymed...popa u prob had beta ideas..if they rhymed n u had structure udve won...no punches or peronas,metas ,worplay etc from either
im gona vote mcdip 4 havin sum structure n rhyme...ur a newb so u were aight...elevate seriously though

MC DIP MERKED HIM SELF LOOK with a sick punch.
Yo Yo Im Mc DiP , U Got It Dude I Am A Dip Shit
dAMN U DISSING UR OWNSELF HE SAYS I AM A DIP SHIT
VOTE = POPPA PERIOD..

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You probably only read the first line of his spit... you dont understand whyy he did that either...

Aight well hhere we go.. MC won this for sure, cause at lease he rhymed..

Popa Doc, please quit now, cause u'll never improve, if this is ure 7th battle thats pretty sad... Please remember to rhyme each two lines at least

MC you had a bad spit as well, but atleast your stuff rhymed... imma have to give it to you on this battle...

Poppa doc-WOrk on a alot of things
better rhymin skillz also work on similies and metas
balance was alright so was structure.....Complexity was alright
just work on a few things

mc dip-Came harder than him.....Nice stuff a few
was weak though....but you do take this becuz of punches
structure was alright...but that what counts
v/mc dip return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

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